HK chocobo -wip-

[montso]

few minutes ago I think to do a ride for half kaisers
And I started to do a chocobo

I do this chocobo based in this chocobo

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http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/3491/chocobo6it.png[/img]

here are the finished chocobo

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http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5390/chocoboau3.png[/IMG]

and here a chocobo with someone riding

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http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9417/chocoborideze3.png[/IMG]

the shade is not good, I tried to copy the shade from the showkaiser chocobo, but on a small size the shade look a bit pillowshaded

 

[clive owen's secret identity]

Correct me if I am wrong, but shouldn't the rider's legs be over the wings and closer to the neck?

 

[montso]

I did the legs go under the wing and close onder the tail
but I can do a version with it closer in the neck

 

[clive owen's secret identity]

Ok, now that I look at it, the Chocobo is kinda small for the rider. I don't want to sound like I'm picking the heck out of this. Your a very good spriter, dont get me wrong. The littlest things bug me.

 

[green raven]

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... obo6it.png[/IMG]

hmm, yeah you could finish it, or just be a tad more original.
your choice :p

 

[EmuMaster2002]

Gee, what a surprise, a chocobo for a template that's much bigger than the RTP...

 

[Ammom]

@EmuMaster2002: No need for the snappy remarks. Comment on the first post, not on green_raven's.

The chocobo looks nice so far, but the feathers to the head seem to stick out at weird, blocked angles.

 

[ccoa]

Green raven's point is that he took Showkaizer's old Kaizer sized chocobo, shrank it, and traced it. Actually, he might have even just used the resize I made of his chocobo and traced it.

You can't make an edit of someone else's work without crediting them. That is plagiarism.

 

[EmuMaster2002]

I WAS commenting on the first post. There is no RTP-sized chocobo, something I've been pining for almost two years now, but several that work with other sizes.

 

[Ammom]

I thought you were referring to Green raven's, since yours was right underneath his. Besides that though, you didn't give feedback on it like he wanted. :P

Anyways, monsto, are you going to add the helmet to the riding chocobo, like in ten?

 

[montso]

green raven, I based in this img that you posted for do mine chocobo
I redraw the chocobo in a new size to use like a ride for half kaisers

 

[Showkaizer]

Personally I think the size is perfect. It's a sprite so its not really supposed to have the actual size ratio. Remember Final fantasy tactics? I don't think you need to change that.

I WOULD however, since you've taken the liberty to base it off my old sprite, suggest that you pull back the neck some. It's leaning a bit too forward for just walking frames. I noticed that in my sprite, but since it was too bug to use anyway I didn't really care =D.

The neck should stand much like an ostrich's neck, only not as tall.

 

[montso]

I changed the neck and I did the walking frames

look a gif from it walking

http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/4840/chocobogifmu9.gif[/IMG]

 

[Munkk]

The legs looks really, really odd while walking I must say.

 

[montso]

yeah I need to work more in the legs, the last frame look strange :P

 

[NexS]

well i like the moving one except the right foot needs to go more forward, not up

 

[montso]

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/6224 ... atepk0.png[/IMG]
thats not finished yet, I need to adjust some bugs and shade it

 

[montso]

I shaded it, the shaded chocobo and the chocobo with a rider are in the first post from the thread