Hey! It's Tuna!

[Tuna]

Hello everyone! I registered about a week ago, played The Blacksmith's Apprentice* which I found while looking through Completed Games, and now I've been inspired to make an RMXP game of my own!

From what I've seen, this looks like a very friendly community, and I'm looking forward to any helpful advice or criticism anyone can offer. With introductions out of the way, I'd like to tell you guys a little bit about my current project and hopefully get a little feedback.

For a more official place to comment on my project, please check out:
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=65492&start=90

It all started out with me having a bit of fun making a map, a snowy town. I kept adding more and more to it, and now I'm pretty much finished with the town, and I think it looks pretty good. I have yet to add any sort of dialogue or storyline, but I think it has the potential to go just about anywhere. If you're interested, here are some screenshots I've taken.

http://s779.photobucket.com/albums/yy77/TheTunaBucket/Snow Town/
http://s779.photobucket.com/albums/yy77/TheTunaBucket/New Snow Interior/
^Updated^

I've only made a few more changes since those were taken. I've added a sign at each exit of the town that say nothing, and I've put some smoke in the chimneys.

The only bit of storyline I've come up with so far is the town being faced with some sort of threat which the player takes it upon himself to deal with despite everyone's disagreement. He will have to travel east of town into an expansive forest where he will learn combat skills from an old hermit before defeating the danger in the forest that poses a threat to the entire town. After dealing with this threat, the player will realize that his isn't the only town faced by the same danger. This will soon lead him on an adventure that I think is a bit overused, and I'll have to think about it some more.

And that's that! I look forward to meeting all of you, and any advice or criticism you can offer would be greatly appreciated!

*http://www.rmxp.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=45224

 

[Dalton]

Welcome, to HBgames/.org/whatever we call this place now... (There has been going on a lot in the last few weeks)
If it is advice you want, you came to the right place. If you want to make a game and present it to us, just work on it for a while and than post at project discussion/concept developement/completed games. (Read the rules to see which your project fits into)
As a start I'll suggest not making your game as you go along, but think it through beforehand to avoid being illogical.
And maybe you should pay a visit to the "mapping improvement 4" thread to get some tips at your mapping..
Anyways I hope you have fun here and learn a lot.

~Dalton~

 

[Nova Paradigma]

Hello, welcome onboard, good luck with your project. ^_^

 

[dadevvtsvre]

If you're looking for some good, honest feedback on your project, then you've come to the right place. And this is a good intro-good to see someone actually introducing themselves with more than one sentence!

Hope you make a thread about your project sometime, I'd love to give you some feedback :D

 

[Tuna]

Thanks for the warm welcome and advice!

@Dalton: I checked out the mapping improvement thread which you know, and I also checked out the mapping tutorial thread you referred me to. They were both very helpful! Thanks!

@Dadevster: If you want to give me feedback on what I have so far, you can check out the maps I've posted.
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=65492&start=90

 

[Ellie]

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[Gray]

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Because that's relevant to anything in particular included in this specific webpage. ;o

Anyways, welcome. :biggrin:

 

[Guest]

;D

 

[Spoo]

Welcome to HBG, Tuna!

Have a good stay and for the love of [insert religious figure] read the rules!

 

[Tuna]

@Commodore: I haven't heard that one before. Haha.
@Spooky: I'll be sure to read those rules.

Thank you Commodore, Gray, Barcode, and Spooky!

 

[Jason]

Thank you Commodore, Gray, Barcode, and Spooky!

How very dare you, I'll have you know, that "barcode" is my son, he's a pack of 8 golden condoms for £9.99 and I love him very much !

But nonetheless, Hi there how're you.

 

[Tuna]

Thank you Commodore, Gray, Barcode, and Spooky!

How very dare you, I'll have you know, that "barcode" is my son, he's a pack of 8 golden condoms for £9.99 and I love him very much !

But nonetheless, Hi there how're you.

Hi, good, how are you? How would you like me to address this pack of 8 golden condoms for £9.99 that you love very much?

 

[KuidonNZ]

Hello there Tuna.
Welcome to HBGames and such.
Good luck with your game, the story line sounds alright.
Id have to say you might need some help improving your mapping
(based on the screens shots you provided here).

But anyway, enjoy your stay here.

 

[Jason]

How would you like me to address this pack of 8 golden condoms for £9.99 that you love very much?

Exactly as you just have, however, I will settle for "Arbi" too...

 

[Brewmeister]

Skinny line, skinny line, fat line, skinny line, skinny line, fat line, skinny line, skinny line, skinny line, fat line, skinny line, skinny line, fat line, skinny line, skinny line, skinny line, fat line, skinny line, skinny line, fat line, skinny line, skinny line.... £9.99!

(aka Arbiter, Arb, Arbi, Blink, barcode, butthead, butt-pirate, chink-lover* and "I'm not gay!")

...But you doesn't have to call him, "Johnson!"

*Holly, no offense intended. :scruff:

 

[Guest]

;D

 

[Tuna]

Alright then. Hello everyone! Thank you!

 

[hellhound]

Welcome! Spelling and Grammar are key! please don't flame or spam, here have some chunky!