Heinze's HKCP work

[Heinze]

I don't know if i'm a good spriter... I love Half Kaisers...But i think that my works are so.. Bad ¬¬...
Am I Have some chance.. In the future to join the group...

My atual work...

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/5140/misteirorv6.png[/imgzoom]

Future Work...

Nobody knows... just God... :grin:

Venetia: Had to split this off the HKCP Announcements Topic because it's not for displaying attempts. Thanks!

Thanks Venetia.. I'll put some stuff here... Wnat to analyze? please ^^

 

[Pink Wabbit]

It looks pillow shaded, and only the hair looks wind swept.

 

[Scorpius]

It looks pillow shaded, and only the hair looks wind swept.

I second this! Very good though.

 

[Sonata]

This isn't pillow-shaded.

Heinze, it looks good, although I think you used a little too much of your shadow-tone on the coat.

 

[fikan]

I think the hair could use a tad more contrast. It looks kind of flat at the regular magnification.

 

[coyotecraft]

I really like the way you did the hat with the small highlight along the edge. Placing the lights and darks together like that make a wet or sometimes metalic look. But it would only work if you did the same thing to the coat and boot on that side also. Keep it consistent.
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I would break up the fold lines so they aren't so solid. The shadow under the collar is a little heavy. The buttons seemed off, I added a small tug next to them.

I wasn't sure what that bulge was. At first I thought I was a boob, but it was too low to be that. I figured it came out of trying to make folds at the arm or a crease at the waist.

 

[Heinze]

I going to put some more front sprites...
thank you for the tips ^^