Gypsy-ish Character

[violettonks]

One of my less crappy attempts at spriting...This is going to be one of the main characters in a game that may or may not ever come to be :P I haven't gotten around to shading yet, partly because I'm lazy, mostly because I'd like to know if I've screwed up in the outlines before I start.

The colours look great on my laptop screen but horrible and dark on this one. Hopefully everyone will get the great colours :P

It's gonna be in (what is the name for the basic sprite style? RTP?) style...
http://www.maj.com/gallery/Tonks/sprites/gypsyrtp.png[/IMG]

I never used to much like the Half Kaizers, but damn, they're much more fun to sprite on.
http://www.maj.com/gallery/Tonks/sprites/hkgyspy.gif[/IMG]

Any and all tips would be much appreciated! :D

 

[___]

Looks good on my laptop screen too, heh heh

 

[Mac]

Looking good, but you need to shade it

 

[violettonks]

Yeah, I know :D I prefer doing all the line art before I start shading...that way I can spot any heinous mistakes and fix 'em without too much trouble.

Nphyx, glad to hear it! This screen makes it look awful!

 

[Kuri$u]

lol pikeys.
look cool