Grim Ninja -HK-

[WalkingAbomination]

Hey guys, thought i'd try working on an HK character before i moved on to my own, i think this needs a bit of work still, please tell me what you think i could improve on it.

All i did to the temp itself was to change the hands, i like this look better for me.
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132 ... mNinja.png http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132 ... ndlook.png

 

[Venetia]

Hot damn, that looks awesome. I can't really see anything wrong. Is that using SK's newest template?

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Yeah , decided to come by soon to say that i will remake some parts of it like the sleeve ends and the hood, i will improve the look of the hood anyway, glad you see nothing wrong, the next look will be better :D

 

[MarcGraubra]

I see anything wrong too. I think it's look very good.

 

[Nickster]

I'd sex that, hardcore.
Twice.

 

[KazeN]

You should add shadows on the hands (from the cloth), otherwise it looks really good.

 

[Ratty524]

Sweet! I love his design, and it is sprited quite well. Great job as always, InvisibleDrifter.

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Thanks guys, i have put up a 2nd look, please tell me what you think of this one compared to the last, left that arm unfinished because i want something else there but don't know what yet.

 

[Venetia]

I think I actually like the first one more? I do like the longer sleeve on the second one, but I like the mask & boots more on the first one (ignoring the little error on the toes).

 

[Shifter]

Awesome as usual..makes me cry..I want to sprite

 

[geox-2.0]

.....*crys and runs* its beutiful

 

[Showkaizer]

I'd sex that, hardcore.
Twice.

Ditto.

That's friggin awesome! One of the best HK's I've seen. You gotta finish this dude .

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Venetia: Yep i think the first had a better look in some areas too, the pants for the 2nd look did not look great so i went back to the first, i also edited the hood a bit as well as the boots.

Showkaizer: Thanks, i have started working on the side frame for it already

Here's a look at the finished frontal and side frame wip.
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132 ... ideWip.png

Thanks for the comments guys.

 

[Shizu]

Wow.. that's some solid, sleek spriting! I'll kill you if you stop now. o_o

 

[___]

That looks great drifter

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Thanks guys, want to let you all know that i will try to complete this character.. but no promises, i have that side frame nearly complete (about 97%) but i have a bad feeling about it though :/, i will post it soon, maybe you guys can give me some tips if you see something i don't.

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Alright here's that side frame, ALMOST finished but something bothers me though...
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132 ... eFront.png

 

[Venetia]

Wow! What progress!

I think I know what looks strange, though--I think the mask needs to be "bumped out" like 1 or 2 pixels. It's so flat against his face that it looks a little smushy.

 

[RavenTDA]

Haha he looks like a Shy Guy from Super Mario.

 

[Grathea]

Looks really good. I'd move the mask out a little though, like Ven suggested.