dandanthedan
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Have a look at my intro storyline...this image is a bit outdated...see under this to read the storyline...
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/CRD_TEXT.png[/img]
Story:
This is the revised version of the story thanks to Injury. Now its nicer to read.
  Once, long ago, in the land of Grendis, four mighty countries reigned supreme. Each country bore an art or craft in which their skills were made possible.
Their world remained in perfect harmony for quite sometime.
  One day, a young tracker from the Rivendale Coven of the South was on his very first mission. He had stumbled upon the meeting of high ranking officials, one from each of the four countries. This boy, aptly named Blu, overheard of their insidious plot...They were to take over the lands of Grendis for their own! Not only that, but they sealed a pact and formed the deadly organization known for hence forth as "Enclaim". Having no time to look at their faces for fear of the death that stood before him not moments ago, Blu fled and ran back to his home to tell everyone, but no one would listen to Blu's outrageous claims of an evil plot. They scoffed and laughed at him, forcing him to leave his home...
 You must now guide Blu on his epic journey to the 4 countries of Grendis, fighting your way through lands filled with evil and darkness! Join Blu and his comrades, Lizzy the Chanter from the Magus Guild of the West, Mikayla the Squire from the Braveheart Alliance of the North, and Elika the acolyte from the Vanadean Temple of the East in their adventures to spread the truth of the Enclaim's horrible plot to overthrow the countries and bring the lands to ruin! Find true love in this epic journey filled with monsters, magic, and more!
Their world remained in perfect harmony for quite sometime.
  One day, a young tracker from the Rivendale Coven of the South was on his very first mission. He had stumbled upon the meeting of high ranking officials, one from each of the four countries. This boy, aptly named Blu, overheard of their insidious plot...They were to take over the lands of Grendis for their own! Not only that, but they sealed a pact and formed the deadly organization known for hence forth as "Enclaim". Having no time to look at their faces for fear of the death that stood before him not moments ago, Blu fled and ran back to his home to tell everyone, but no one would listen to Blu's outrageous claims of an evil plot. They scoffed and laughed at him, forcing him to leave his home...
 You must now guide Blu on his epic journey to the 4 countries of Grendis, fighting your way through lands filled with evil and darkness! Join Blu and his comrades, Lizzy the Chanter from the Magus Guild of the West, Mikayla the Squire from the Braveheart Alliance of the North, and Elika the acolyte from the Vanadean Temple of the East in their adventures to spread the truth of the Enclaim's horrible plot to overthrow the countries and bring the lands to ruin! Find true love in this epic journey filled with monsters, magic, and more!
My old unrevised storyline..
  There was a time when the world of Grendis was divided into 4 countries, each bearing a crest which symbolizes their arts
and crafts. The world was in perfect harmony. An unshakeable peace(refer below for the 4 countries)
   One day, while a Tracker who grew up in Rivendale Coven of the South named Blu is on his way to his very first mission, He stumbled upon a meeting of high ranking officials of the 4 countries who plans to take over the world of Grendis and formed a secret organization named only as "Enclaim". He didn't see their faces but he could hear them clearly. He was petrified of their horrifying plan. He was the only one who knew of the Enclaim plans. He went home to tell his countrymen but no one would believe him.
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   This is his story as he try to spread the horrible plans to the other 3 countries and stop the Enclaim. He seeks help from the other 3 countries but found to have no luck. No one would believe him. He was dubbed to be a heretic and excommunicated even from his homecountry. But soon he meets up with his other allies who also believes that something is cooking up. He could only convince one of every country, Lizzy from the Magus Guild of the West, Mikayla from the Braveheart Alliance of the North and Elika from the Vanadean Temple of the East. All of them are female. He was disheartened at first but later on discovered their real strength....or rather real emotions. Soon as the attacks began it was too late for the 4 countries to fight back, but it wasn't for Blu and his party.
and crafts. The world was in perfect harmony. An unshakeable peace(refer below for the 4 countries)
   One day, while a Tracker who grew up in Rivendale Coven of the South named Blu is on his way to his very first mission, He stumbled upon a meeting of high ranking officials of the 4 countries who plans to take over the world of Grendis and formed a secret organization named only as "Enclaim". He didn't see their faces but he could hear them clearly. He was petrified of their horrifying plan. He was the only one who knew of the Enclaim plans. He went home to tell his countrymen but no one would believe him.
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   This is his story as he try to spread the horrible plans to the other 3 countries and stop the Enclaim. He seeks help from the other 3 countries but found to have no luck. No one would believe him. He was dubbed to be a heretic and excommunicated even from his homecountry. But soon he meets up with his other allies who also believes that something is cooking up. He could only convince one of every country, Lizzy from the Magus Guild of the West, Mikayla from the Braveheart Alliance of the North and Elika from the Vanadean Temple of the East. All of them are female. He was disheartened at first but later on discovered their real strength....or rather real emotions. Soon as the attacks began it was too late for the 4 countries to fight back, but it wasn't for Blu and his party.
World: Grendis
The 4 countries (i made them new names):
+ Braveheart Alliance of the North - Lion Crest
Founder: Sir Xchyler Leonhart (Rune Knight)
Base: Fort Knox
Heiharchy:
  + Rune Knight
  - Paladin
  - Knight
  - Squire
+ Vanadean Temple of the East - Eagle Crest
Founder: Arch Priest Arek Eaglehorn
Base: Melena Shrine
Heiharchy:
  + Arch Priest
  - High Priest
  - Priest
  - Acolyte
+ Magus Guild of the West - Dragon Crest
Founder: Arch Mage Gerrith Draconix
Base: Dracolith Island
Heiharchy:
  + Arch Mage
  - High Mage
  - Mage
  - Chanter
+ Rivendale Coven of the South - Raven Crest
Founder: Death Striker Gie the Raveneye
Base: Grak Desert
Heiharchy:
  + Death Striker
  - Silent Striker
  - Striker
  - Tracker
+++Enclaim+++
  - a secret organization of high rankings officials of the 4 countries who plans to take over the world of Grendis.
  - unknown heiharchy
Founder: Sir Xchyler Leonhart (Rune Knight)
Base: Fort Knox
Heiharchy:
  + Rune Knight
  - Paladin
  - Knight
  - Squire
+ Vanadean Temple of the East - Eagle Crest
Founder: Arch Priest Arek Eaglehorn
Base: Melena Shrine
Heiharchy:
  + Arch Priest
  - High Priest
  - Priest
  - Acolyte
+ Magus Guild of the West - Dragon Crest
Founder: Arch Mage Gerrith Draconix
Base: Dracolith Island
Heiharchy:
  + Arch Mage
  - High Mage
  - Mage
  - Chanter
+ Rivendale Coven of the South - Raven Crest
Founder: Death Striker Gie the Raveneye
Base: Grak Desert
Heiharchy:
  + Death Striker
  - Silent Striker
  - Striker
  - Tracker
+++Enclaim+++
  - a secret organization of high rankings officials of the 4 countries who plans to take over the world of Grendis.
  - unknown heiharchy
Characters:
(updated with new character=Rayz)
Name : Blu
Age: 19
Class: Tracker
Description:
    The main protagonist of the game. Silent but clever and fast. Orphaned and raised to become a thief. Soon meets with three others to stop Enclaim from taking over the world of Grendis. Not so much into girls. Mission above all else.
Motto: "One moment Im there, next moment you're dead"
Name : Lizzy
Age: 17
Class: Chanter
Description:
    Blu's very firs ally on their quest to stop Enclaim. Cute and very cheerful. Greatest dream is to become more powerful than an Arch Mage. Hates Blu at first but kinda liked him as the story progresses.
Motto: "The world is full of goodies, no one should be selfish"
Name : Mikayla
Age: 20
Class: Squire
Description:
    Strong willed and a hardened woman but is discovered later on to have a weakness on silent guys like Blu. A very powerful ally. Only daughter of the Braveheart Alliance Founder Sir Xchyler Leonhart.
Motto: "Duty and Honor above all else"
Name : Elika
Age: 18
Class: Acolyte
Description:
    A great assistance to Blu's party because of her healing magic and support abilities. Loud and funny. Hates Blu for being so stubborn but fell in love with him after Blu saves his life. She has a very deep and dangerous secret.
Motto: "Helping is a hobby"
New Character:
Name: Rayz "The Wanderer"
Age: unknown but around mid 30s
Class: unknown but specializes with guns and rifles.
Description:
    Although this character's background is unknown, he proves to be a very reliable and powerful ally. He wanders through the lands of Grendis searching for his brother who was lost for 18 years. He joins Blu's party whenever his help is greatly needed.
Age: 19
Class: Tracker
Description:
    The main protagonist of the game. Silent but clever and fast. Orphaned and raised to become a thief. Soon meets with three others to stop Enclaim from taking over the world of Grendis. Not so much into girls. Mission above all else.
Motto: "One moment Im there, next moment you're dead"
Name : Lizzy
Age: 17
Class: Chanter
Description:
    Blu's very firs ally on their quest to stop Enclaim. Cute and very cheerful. Greatest dream is to become more powerful than an Arch Mage. Hates Blu at first but kinda liked him as the story progresses.
Motto: "The world is full of goodies, no one should be selfish"
Name : Mikayla
Age: 20
Class: Squire
Description:
    Strong willed and a hardened woman but is discovered later on to have a weakness on silent guys like Blu. A very powerful ally. Only daughter of the Braveheart Alliance Founder Sir Xchyler Leonhart.
Motto: "Duty and Honor above all else"
Name : Elika
Age: 18
Class: Acolyte
Description:
    A great assistance to Blu's party because of her healing magic and support abilities. Loud and funny. Hates Blu for being so stubborn but fell in love with him after Blu saves his life. She has a very deep and dangerous secret.
Motto: "Helping is a hobby"
New Character:
Name: Rayz "The Wanderer"
Age: unknown but around mid 30s
Class: unknown but specializes with guns and rifles.
Description:
    Although this character's background is unknown, he proves to be a very reliable and powerful ally. He wanders through the lands of Grendis searching for his brother who was lost for 18 years. He joins Blu's party whenever his help is greatly needed.
Features:
- Sideview battle system
- Event Quests System
- Weapon-skill learning system
- Alchemy system
- Underground Battle Arena
- Dating system
- multiple endings
- deep storyline
- interesting love story
- Event Quests System
- Weapon-skill learning system
- Alchemy system
- Underground Battle Arena
- Dating system
- multiple endings
- deep storyline
- interesting love story
Now for the screenshots:
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/screen10.jpg[/img]http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/screen7.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen8.jpg[/img]http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/screen9.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... dden-1.jpg[/img]http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/desuscrren.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen1.jpg[/img] http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen6.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen2.jpg[/img]http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/screen5.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen3.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen4.jpg[/img]
now what do you think?
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen8.jpg[/img]http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/screen9.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... dden-1.jpg[/img]http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/desuscrren.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen1.jpg[/img] http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen6.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen2.jpg[/img]http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp112/dandanthedan/screen5.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen3.jpg[/img]
http://i403.photobucket.com/albums/pp11 ... creen4.jpg[/img]
now what do you think?
any help in the storyline or plot is a great help...^_^
_+_Blueyonder_+_
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