Gelel Chronicles

[SoulReaperGod]

Gelel Chronicles


Hi I am SoulReaperGod and this is my very first game so don't be so judgemental about the game.
I have only worked on it for a few days so far so I decided to let you people try it out for now.

Spoiler: The Story

The Story Follows a young boy name Gelel. One day Gelel was exploring his cave that is under his house looking for any monsters hiding but instead he saw someone so he snucked up on the person and asked what were they doing inside of his cave and he answered with this "What do you want Gelel?" that startled Gelel so Gelel wanted to know how he knew his name and the unknown person replied with this "It's simple we fought the dark army together but this hasn't happened yet it's in the near future!" then he dissapears after saying "It was nice seeing you again Gelel." and that is where our story takes off from.

More to come.

Spoiler: Characters of Gelel Chronicles

Gelel
Gelel is the hero of this story. Gelel and Mara are best friends cause they went through alot of hard times together over the years since their parents died fighting the Dark Army

Mara
Mara is Gelel's best friend they known each other since their parents died fighting the Dark Army.

Rikku
Rikku is a young hunter who's village was destroyed by the Dark Army.

Lucious
Lucious is a thief who tried to steal from Gelel and Mara but later on asked if he could join Gelel and Mara to destroy the Dark Army.

Hawk
Hawk is a Cleric who was asked by the Grand Angel to join Gelel and his friends to defeat the Dark Army.

???????
He is the person who tells Gelel that he and Gelel fought the Dark Army together in the near future. His nam is not know yet.

Spoiler: ScreenShots

No Screenshots cause my screenies are xcf cause I used GIMP to get them so if anybody would be kind enough to get me the screenshots that would be great.

Spoiler: Credits

None at the moment if you notice something that someone made tell me so I can credit them

 

[Luthur]

Ok. This isn't really enough for a game topic. You haven't credited Lord of Shadows, and a hell of a lot of other people for their resources. Just putting 'I'll credit you if you tell me' is not good enough. Also, why don't you just use Alt-Prtsc for the screenshots? The storyline really isn't enough either.

Alright, I downloaded your demo and played your game. I just want to warn you that you left your project unencrypted. If you don't want your scripts/resources stolen, I'd lock it.

Your actual game:

I congratulate you first off. This is more than what most first projects look like. But after that... You seriously need to work on your mapping and storyline. Your mapping is very very plain and undetailed. Look at some mapping tutorials. Secondly, you need an introduction to your game. Not many game jump straight into the action. There are also a lot of eventing errors, such as the bats you fight first off come back to life as soon as you've killed them, and at one point while Gelel is talking to the demon guy, Gelel's sprite randomly appears on top of a cave wall. Also, when you come out the caves into the village (again, serious mapping work needed), the Inn is impossible to exit (you get jammed on the door. Then you go off the map, and I can find nothing else to do. If that's the end of your demo, it isn't enough.

That's my word's of wisdom. Good luck.

EDIT: also, please don't use 'A Charming Font Superexpanded' because it is everything but charming, and is virtualy impossible to read. Use a nice clear, clean font like 'Serif'.

 

[SoulReaperGod]

okay can you delete this it seems i'm not done

 

[Despain]

we don't delete topics. but i will lock it and give you a verbal warning.

read the RULES before posting a topic. seriously we don't want this kind of garbage here. if you don't have everything ready, then don't post yet. waiting a few days to have your screenshots is preferable to looking like a total idiot