first midi

[badmonur]

Considering I have not one musical bone in my body, and the fact of me being black and having no rhythm. I made a midi. IT sux donkey nutz but its my first try.

 

[Danton Lavergne]

I don't know how being black affects anything really... Anyways, for your first song, this is pretty decent. Although at parts it does sound like randomly played notes which should be avoided at all costs.

 

[Shizu]

and the fact of me being black and having no rhythm.

I'm a brotha too and I make pretty decent music. We all got it inside, bro.

This is not bad, in fact it's great, maybe not suited for really deep emotions (e.g anger, sadness, haste etc), but the instrumentation is well and the rhythm is fine. There's nothing really that I can say "this doesn't sound right". Give it another try, maybe you can cook up some hott shizz, cuz this one is showing some good potential.