Fantasy Story [MapleStory RPG]

[transformers]

Prologue:

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Story:

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Characters:

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Tyson
Started out as a normal villager on Maple Island, finally decided to leave and become a warrior like his father. He is very naive when it comes to fighting, he uses a sword as his weapon and can be the strongest battler.

Kara
A runaway princess from Ariant, she's known to be very beautiful and deceiving sometimes. She uses wands and staffs as her weapon, watch out for her deadly spells.

Jacky
An archer thats very impassive, she respects whoever is strong but does not accept defeat. Her weapon is a bow, she will hardly ever miss.

Zell
A thief that will do anything that will profit him. He's known for stealing and backstabbing. His weapon is a claw and he uses stars to attack, he can end up being the fastest battler out there.

Screenshots:

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Demo:

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please dont post yet, or make rude comments like some retard >:V

 

[friend]

"100 years after the events of the 5 warriors defeating the Black Magician and saving the World Tree, the group Black Wing who fought by the Black Mage side is trying to revive him. More to come"

No offense but, what is this?

No screenshots, no nothing.

All coming soon.

And the storyline is CRAPPP

 

[transformers]

"100 years after the events of the 5 warriors defeating the Black Magician and saving the World Tree, the group Black Wing who fought by the Black Mage side is trying to revive him. More to come"

No offense but, what is this?

No screenshots, no nothing.

All coming soon.

And the storyline is CRAPPP

sorry, i'm not even finish, im uploading demo and taking ss'es :smoke:
jeez couldnt you make a comment when i had something interesting :toot:

 

[RobinP]

"100 years after the events of the 5 warriors defeating the Black Magician and saving the World Tree, the group Black Wing who fought by the Black Mage side is trying to revive him. More to come"

No offense but, what is this?

No screenshots, no nothing.

All coming soon.

And the storyline is CRAPPP

sorry, i'm not even finish, im uploading demo and taking ss'es :smoke:
jeez couldnt you make a comment when i had something interesting :toot:

I think the question is, couldn't you put off posting this till you had something interesting?

 

[transformers]

"100 years after the events of the 5 warriors defeating the Black Magician and saving the World Tree, the group Black Wing who fought by the Black Mage side is trying to revive him. More to come"

No offense but, what is this?

No screenshots, no nothing.

All coming soon.

And the storyline is CRAPPP

sorry, i'm not even finish, im uploading demo and taking ss'es :smoke:
jeez couldnt you make a comment when i had something interesting :toot:

I think the question is, couldn't you put off posting this till you had something interesting?

Project Discussion

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jeez i thought this was the right thread to post this -_- give me a break, let me finish uploading the images and post everything before making a comment.
I should of just waited

 

[RobinP]

I'm not arguing the point of if you should have posted it here, I'm telling you that you shouldn't post a cheap 'Prologue' and nothing else. Build up the project introduction as much as you can before posting.

First impressions are everything.

 

[Lazer Kirby]

Project Discussion

All Incomplete game projects regardless of engine used to create are posted here. Screenshots are required for a complete project topic. If your topic would be better suited for Concept Development (i.e. you don't have screenshots, videos, or demos, or want feedback on specific concept materials), please post it there.
jeez i thought this was the right thread to post this -_- give me a break, let me finish uploading the images and post everything before making a comment.
I should of just waited

The bolded words mean it is better suited for Concept Development, not Project Discussion.

 

[Jaberwoky]

If you don't have all the required materials for a project topic, the obvious thing to do would be to not make a project topic until you do. It serves no purpose to make one before you have all the info ready. What are people going to comment on if there's nothing there?
All you've succeeded in doing is making yourself look like a fool, and lashing out at everyone is not helping that image at all.

 

[Stardust]

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