EX shadows rise
- Thread starter Vazoh
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Stop saying "I'm only 11" as to provide a weakass excuse for incompetence.
I read the plotline and the character info...and I'm not impressed - to say the least.
The story (obviously) needs to be expanded a lot more. You don't necessarily need to complete the entire story first before creating the game, but you certainly need more than what you have now to give yourself a direction to move the game (and maps) in.
The mapping isn't really that great either (from what I've seen in the screenshots).
Keep trying. Flesh out the characters more. Why does the mom want to tell the mayor again? Nothing is really clear.
I read the plotline and the character info...and I'm not impressed - to say the least.
The story (obviously) needs to be expanded a lot more. You don't necessarily need to complete the entire story first before creating the game, but you certainly need more than what you have now to give yourself a direction to move the game (and maps) in.
The mapping isn't really that great either (from what I've seen in the screenshots).
Keep trying. Flesh out the characters more. Why does the mom want to tell the mayor again? Nothing is really clear.
Vazoh... What don't you get when people tell you not to rush things?
We don't want to see a story sofar what we want is an actual plot! What you do here is not to tell us what your game is about, but what happens in the first ten minutes or something. Why should I care how many maps I visit before I meet the first boss, when I am looking at the STORY?
Your so called characters are the most flat and boring things I ever came across. Why should I care about a boy with no real history, who is just picked by cnace to fight the shadows. Come on why should anyone ask a little boy without any history to fight hordes of monsters?
I won't even bother to try the demo! Because you are not showing me enough effort in your thread. No effort = No downloads.
Learn how to map towns! It is extremely difficult for most people (including myself) so look at tutorials. It really helps, trust me.
Fullscreen option is no feature. It is build in (it is really just pressing two keys)
And above all! Just because you are 11 you can't expect us to let you break every rule of gamemaking.
Please stop rushing it like that. Those things need time. Even though you got your hands on some program that makes it easier it is not something that you can do in about a week. So please sit down learn and start your project thread in about a month or so. Learn from other project threads. You will notice that people do it better than this. Learn from them.
This is all I have to say
~Dalton~
We don't want to see a story sofar what we want is an actual plot! What you do here is not to tell us what your game is about, but what happens in the first ten minutes or something. Why should I care how many maps I visit before I meet the first boss, when I am looking at the STORY?
Your so called characters are the most flat and boring things I ever came across. Why should I care about a boy with no real history, who is just picked by cnace to fight the shadows. Come on why should anyone ask a little boy without any history to fight hordes of monsters?
I won't even bother to try the demo! Because you are not showing me enough effort in your thread. No effort = No downloads.
Learn how to map towns! It is extremely difficult for most people (including myself) so look at tutorials. It really helps, trust me.
Fullscreen option is no feature. It is build in (it is really just pressing two keys)
And above all! Just because you are 11 you can't expect us to let you break every rule of gamemaking.
Please stop rushing it like that. Those things need time. Even though you got your hands on some program that makes it easier it is not something that you can do in about a week. So please sit down learn and start your project thread in about a month or so. Learn from other project threads. You will notice that people do it better than this. Learn from them.
This is all I have to say
~Dalton~