Ellenor's template samples (updated 16 july)

[ellenor]

Hello everyone I am back again :P
This time I am working on a template for my game
This far I have the mature woman and the younger version of women and a male ^^
and now i gona start to work with the kids :D
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6902/sampleofthetemplatews6.png[/img]
By ellenor

This is a sample of the mature woman with a dress
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2224/younggirlsamplecopyir8.png[/img]
And here we go with a sample of the younger woman

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6131/malesamplecopyod7.png[/img]
And just like before a sample :P
This time a male not the best outfit but argh

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/7130/samplemalesl7.png[/img]
Since some people thought the male was to skinny I made a new one :D
Actually I like this one better haha ^^

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/522/kidsamplecopygi2.png[/img]
Also I got a sample of the kids ^^
I will make 2 versions of the kids also this one is the bigger one
I will make even smaller kids ^^

Since someone asked if they could see one of these while they walked
you get a sneak peek of one of the charaters from my game ^^
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/4981/slowmotionprincessqe3.gif[/img]
By ellenor
Princess Raina ^^

The template is only a little bigger than the rtps orginal ones

and here we got some diffrent eyes I made to make them little more unique ^^
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/4760/facescopyfy3.png[/img]
By ellenor
And to show the size diffrent between my template and rtps ones I remade one of the civilian people ^^
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/282/oldpersonrtpsampleqw7.png[/img]

Also here is a screenshot with some charaters I made using my template togheter with rtp's tileset
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/9663/testwithrtpcopyoo0.png[/img]
So what do you think?

I am yet not sure if I will realese my template since it is for my game ^^
But I may do it after my game is finish I guess ^^

p.s I am sorry but When i checked my template I had little hard to see a error on the neck
But I will change it a little to see if it will be better ^^
Sorry ^^

 

[kingjing]

Extremely good! I hope to see more from you soon!

 

[monkeydlu]

looks really fun! The size could really fit with the rtp, but idk about the style though :\

 

[Sonata]

I really like the style, good job so far!

Is something wrong with her neck though?

 

[ellenor]

Thank you guys ^^
hmmm
the neck?
maybe it look a little weird cause of the clothes or hair ^^
It looks better in rmxp though ^^

 

[blackhand]

I think the neck looks weird only because the dress isn't covering her collarbone area and seems to hang off the shoulders.  It's hard to see without zooming in, but maybe if you made the neckline more rounded instead of cutting straight across it would fix that apparent issue.

The work looks good so far, but do you have images of the base template to show as well?  I think that'd give us a better idea of the sprite in general.

 

[xinrua]

the head looks like it floating i mid air....put something on the neck to make it look atached....

 

[ellenor]

Hmm, well when I checked the template I couldent really see any error with the neck but I can change it a little ^^
(Updated now the younger female is done) :D

 

[ellenor]

Updated the post :D
now a screenshot of the charaters in use and
a picture that show the size diffrent between my template and the rtps ones

 

[monkeydlu]

the male ones seems way to skinny to me. You should broaden the shoulders a bit, same with the legs, make them seem more masculine compared to the girls. I also feel the arms a more stubby than I'd like, but that should be fixed if you broaden the shoulders a bit.

the girls looks pretty good though, I like that side view especially.

 

[CeruSkye]

I think it's a great start! And it will look better then standard rtp. The arms seem a little short in the front view of some characters. And you need to work on not pillowing shading clothes. There are some great tutorials on spriting on this site. The tutorials link at the top of the page doesn't seem to work for me, so I'm posting a few links here. Good luck! ^__^

http://www.rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=5107.0

http://www.rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=232.0

 

[Devon Jacobs]

I think they look good, alot of potential, keep up th good work.

 

[harsvalen]

Wow, these are really good, if they were a bit bigger, a showed more detail, I would want to use the style for my game. KEEP IT UP!

 

[Samboy]

Wow. Another template. Geez, RMXP.org's really firing them out, aren't we? This one blends really well with the RTP, nice work.

 

[ellenor]

harsvalen - Wow, these are really good, if they were a bit bigger, a showed more detail, I would want to use the style for my game. KEEP IT UP

Actually I am thinking about to make another template after this one that is a bit bigger and got more details ^^

to Ñ

 

[harsvalen]

harsvalen - Wow, these are really good, if they were a bit bigger, a showed more detail, I would want to use the style for my game. KEEP IT UP

Actually I am thinking about to make another template after this one that is a bit bigger and got more details ^^

Wow, that's convinient! sounds good. Keep up the amazing work! Don't quit, you're to good!

 

[ellenor]

Bump ^^
Updated with a new male ^^

 

[Gulch666]

id like to see a gif of the walk animation if possible, it has a good style to it

 

[OMG_RAWR!]

very good but the eyes kinda seem messed up on the male for sure

 

[ellenor]

Well i got more than one kind ^^
just felt to use the face with a scar ^^
thanks for the comment