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Dreamland

Helloooo
I am making a game and it is called Dreamland! I posted this because I am only 11 and new at this and I wondered what other people would think of my project! :lol: :toot:

Characters:

Elvander:
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/5563/elvanderof8.png[/img]
She is a young elf who lives in the small "Silver Vally Village" with her mother Syana, and her father Marken, when she finds a portal, and learns that she must venture into Dreamland to find the lost Jewels of power. She does not know it, but the quest that she must go on will bring many good and bad things into her life.

Maranea:
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/8668/maraneaff2.png[/img]
Maranea is a dark wizard, who after having her world fall into darkness when she was very small, now wishes for another world, which only the jewels of power can help her take. She is constantly being stopped by Elvander and Lyana, but also has very good magic, and is already powerfull.

Lyanna:
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/2294/lyannaxh0.png[/img]
She is also a powerfull wizard, but she is good, and is trying to stop Maranea. She comes to Elvander as a small white bird, and helps her a lot in her quest. She has many friends, who a lot of times, provide a lot of help to Elvander, and she is also a very, very good sorcerer. 

Ivory
Ivory is a young girl with bright red hair and blue eyes, who lives in the small forest town of Oakwood under the care of Leona Mist, the Feary (Fee-air-ee, the leader of the small village). She is a little bit like Elvander, exept, since she has no parents, (anymore) she can do what she pleases, if it's not too dangerous. 

Elysha
Elysha is a very, very annoying girl. The best word to describe Elysha is annoying. She is a very good dark wizard, and she loves to taunt prisoners and she is very rude, she back talks, and she breaks lot's of rules. She and Ivory (when they meet) HATE each other, and so, when they have to battle...
She is also Maranea's apprentice.

story:
The story is about a young Elf named Elvander. She lives in Silver Vally Village. She wakes up one morning, the day before the village fair. Her mother asks her to collect some apples for her, and after she does, it gets late, and she goes home. While she is sleeping though.... Terrible things are happinging, a evil wizard named Maranea, is talking about taking the "Jewels of Power" until Lyana (a Mage of Light) comes to stop her. Maranea shoots lightning at her though, and then......
Elvander wakes up.
Your friend Bonny is waiting for you, at tells you that you slept in, and that she'll meet you outside. When you leave, everyone is already outside enjoying the village fair, and when you join Bonny, she asks you if you'd like to go to their seacret spot, and you say yes.
When you get there, strange things are happening, some sort of spell lights up the sky, and the world seams to go black and white! You are transported to a strange land....
When you wake up, you are in bed! With Bonny next to you. You try to talk to her, but the can't speak! Well, only in giberish... she says things like "kjgf" and "jldkfjgl" You look around, and see a beautifull white bird by your side, your parents say, "It won't leave you." You look at it, and somehow you know it's saying....

The war is coming, you must get the Jewels,
    you must venture into Dreamland....

The story is about Elvander and her quest to save the lost Jewels, which she must travel into dreamland to find.

Demo! Yay!
( it's fixed! and now it has the font!)
http://www.mediafire.com/?tjcd0xjrncp

Screanshots! :smile:
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7964 ... otsae8.png[/img]

Features!

You have the choice of going into full screan or not, there is a tutorial, and I will probably and some extra stuff like alternat endings or something like that.

Note:
I am not done this though, so I havn't finished the game, if there are any questions about my post.

Thank you! :smile:
 
Good luck with your project - sounds like a cute idea!

There are lots of nice people around here, so don't be afraid to ask
for help if you need it.

Respectfully,

Falloutfan.
 
I think this is quite good. Although some of this a little cliche, I'm sure that you can make it work.

You might want to try to desaturate the hair on those sprites, though. That way, you'll be able to see the detail of the hair better.

I wish you good luck with your project. If you need any help, everyone here in the forums is willing to help! Good luck! ^_^
 

Rare

Member

Awww this is so cute. Your actually 10? AWWW.

Anyway, never give up! Make sure you finish this whole game so you can show it off to all the people in the "Completed Projects and Demos" section!
 
I'm glad you made the title of the thread "my game". For a second there I thought this was actually my game. But you cleared that up by saying it was yours. Thank you.

Was this entirely necesary? - Andy
 
Disdain;311299 said:
I'm glad you made the title of the thread "my game". For a second there I thought this was actually my game. But you cleared that up by saying it was yours. Thank you.

Grrr. Disdain, have ever posted anything helpful, constructive, or even nice, ever?! You come into a ten year-old girl's project thread and insult her, based solely on her choice of thread title? Please leave forever.
 
It seems a little fuzzy to me (your title). Did you save it as .png format? If you saved it as .jpg it might have have compressed it which leaves artifices or "dust".

I don't have a problem with the blue hair, but the pink hair looks stiff, curve it more so is doesn't go down at such a straight angle.
 
Looks very nice. I agree that the storyline is sort of cliche'd, but you have to admit that it's hard to make a fantasy RPG without cliche'ing it.

PS If you don't know how to sprite, you can hire people to sprite for you and help with the project or learn to sprite, there are awesome tutorials here. :D
 
Honestly? The hair is too saturated, so it doesn't look right. You can see how it doesn't show the details of their hair very well, right? I'm no expert, though.

You could probably make a resource request and ask for someone to make you some battlers for Elvander and John.
 
I know that the pictures are fuzzy, they will be png in the actuall game though, on this though I make them like that because It keeps saying that the files are too big.:-/
 
Ah, such a young tender age. Good to see some younger ones on here, and ones that are computer savy at that age is cool. I say good luck to you dude. Never let any negativity get to you and your work will just get better and better.

Peace,
EiB
 
I know that the story is a cliche, but there are other parts that arn't as main in the story, like there is one part were robbers steal all of your possesions and you wake up in hospital in a town with half of your health. That's when you meet john and find out that he rescued you, and then there is a flashback.^_^ I'm not sure if that parts a cliche.:-/

Edit: I think that I'm goin to put in a request thread for battelers for Aranea, and Laynah.^_^
 
I'm not sure yet, I'm terrible at scripts so I might just look around in the Script Request Section.:D
This is what Elvander will look like in the actual game though, she will be a png along with everything els.I'm not sure if her hair looks better.:p
View attachment 2869
 
Wow this project is getting very popular. I figure its the fact that such a young girl is making a game and its quite impressive ;)

Don't worry about the cliche story. Honestly, for a 10-year old, the story is excellent. The battlers are pretty good too. Make sure you get some screenshots out soon!

Also, if you ever need help with anything, feel free to PM me (or anyone here, frankly)

*walks away and gets some orange juice*
 
thanks!^_^
Actually I won't have any screanshots until after christmas....':|
(I hope that's ok) My dad refuses to get me it, but I will get it for christmas (the actuall RPGmaker soft where) since is like $60 but I did the free trial, and I know how to make events and maps and all of the other stuff.)
I hope no one mindes.....':|
 
Oh... you are so adorable when u said ur only 10
hehehe

i can help you with the logo if u want...
just tell me what actually u are looking for
and i will try to help you okay?

Goodluck to the Project ^__^
 
Dreamland;311698 said:
I'm not sure yet, I'm terrible at scripts so I might just look around in the Script Request Section.:D

View attachment 2869
Well actually, almost all of us don't make our own scripts for our video games, we use other people's scripts and give credit. There are already many good scripts in the "Submitted RGSS Scripts" forum. There's a thread there called "Forum Script Listings", go there, and you'll be able to find any script you want. :152-A02:
(As you can see, a game needs scripts because the default system isn't very good and is bland)
 

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