Dream Theme (song) demo....... feedback please....

[sephiroth_with_a_gun2]

I made this using Propeller Head's Reason. I aimed at making it sound like a Dream theme, for my whole game takes place inside a dream, hence I used the glocks instrument patch...... I just want some advise on how I could make this better, or if it matches a "dream theme" at all..... You can use this for your game for all I care, but credit would be nice. Thanx guys.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ovxy1x9hefy

*Also, if you liked this, I'm willing to work with someone on music production. I've been meaning to start a musical project but I'm working alone right now and can't come up with many beats. We could make music for RPG Maker music, or just for fun.*

^^^ whoops, I noticed the file was messed up. I changed it to an .MP3 file now. Sorryz.  :blush:

 

[Nickster]

its great, but i wouldnt call it "dream." its more like a music box, and it could get quite annoying if it was overplayed alone by itself. you might want to add some more instruments, tone down the exsisting ones so they're less harsh, if you want more of a complete and dream like effect.

Its great though so far, keep up the good work! :D

 

[Hanzo Kimura]

its more like a christmas tune xD...
but its very peaceful
i feel sleepy listening to it xD
i thought it was actually a "song"
with some vocals
but hahaha its a music

 

[ramonbastos]

Hummm.. thi..s..  musi...c...  is... *sleeps*

lol

 

[sephiroth_with_a_gun2]

EXACTLY!!!! A song of slumber!!!!! A "Dream Theme", that makes you sleepy.  :lol:
I'm adding more instruments to make it sound more "enchanted" and "dream-like". :P brb