Drawings of boredom

[KuraiYukita]

The branch clan leader:
http://kuraiyukita.deviantart.com/art/T ... r-72875277

No hope left:
http://kuraiyukita.deviantart.com/art/N ... t-69472887

Smiling Graveyard:
http://kuraiyukita.deviantart.com/art/S ... d-69471766


I do usually draw during the lessons at school, and I do the coloring at home.
I haven't learned how shadeyet.
What do you think about the drawings? What can I do to make them better?

 

[mawk]

You spelled "existence" wrong.

In the first two pictures, the pencil crayon colouring totally destroys and obscures your linework. I advise against using pencil crayons to fill your art unless you're colouring more lightly than you are -- smooshed on like that, the eye can hardly detect where you've put your pencil.

The last drawing seems better as far as that's concerned, mainly because skin tone is light enough to avoid obscuring pencil lines. However, I suggest you put a little more study into body proportions and facial features, as well as observe how hair falls the next time you see it drawn -- she seems a little amorphous, and her hair seems very thin and bottom-heavy.

It's not awful for a beginning, though. Keep it up and I guarantee you'll improve! :thumb: