Dragon

[Toshi]

What do u think?

http://imagesload.net/daten_no/1212328821_Unbenannt.bmp[/img]

C&C welcome...^^

 

[RRDM]

Keep it up looks promising. I would be tempted to use that as the on map battler image, you get to see before fighting it, then use a more manga styled battler. [Just my style of doing combats. Since its all front veiw, (lest you rescript everything. and I cant egin to figure that out. @_@)

 

[dadevvtsvre]

That looks really good! I like what you're doing with the shading so far. And you are going to get rid of the black outline, right?

 

[badmonur]

It looks pretty good so far, you might want to switch some hue values in your pallet. I know its just the wing but try to define a light source and not pillow shade

 

[Toshi]

That looks really good! I like what you're doing with the shading so far. And you are going to get rid of the black outline, right?

Yeah... ^^

It looks pretty good so far, you might want to switch some hue values in your pallet. I know its just the wing but try to define a light source and not pillow shade

I think I change the pallet a lil bit. I think the green is to dark. I'll lightn it a lil bit later. The light source will be added when I'll sprite the details like (whats the englisch word for "schuppen"?) the lil thingys on a fish...

 

[Muse]

Schuppen = Scales?

Oh. Right. I'd better leave a more useful comment than that. I'm not so sure about the anatomy of the wings. It kind of seems like the wings are incredibly fragile and not really connected to the body. Maybe thicken the connecting joint where the wings meet body, almost like shoulders. ^_^

 

[Toshi]

Yeah, thats the word I searched :D
Mhhhh... I think your right. It looks a lil bit "weak"...

EDIT:
Here's a update...
http://imagesload.net/daten_no/12123504 ... nannt1.bmp[/img]

Btw... This is my first sprite...

 

[RRDM]

It is developing well, At the part where the wings connect, try widening the actual "bone" area, (green part) that is one of the more major parts that is making it look week.

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j23/w ... dragon.jpg[/img]

Here this is what I mean, see how the wings connect? Much like how ones armsconnect.

 

[OMG_RAWR!]

Some of the shading could use a little bit of a touch up but it looks good so far with how your going with it.