Did I ever Improve?

[zenrdy]

Hey! Thanks for reading my thread. Now lets get down to business, I have a couple of Banner's here and  I wanted to know If I ever Improved?
Backrounds are By Pescoil


My First Banner Ever.

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n153 ... n/Sing.png[/img]

My Most Recents 
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n153 ... dude13.jpg[/img]
And
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n153 ... by_dis.png[/img]

Comment's On how to make'em better and how terrible they are would be appreciated.

 

[Luminier]

I'm surprised that you made this topic, despite the fact that you already posted in the appropriate thread.  :brow:

For the record, yes. Especially if you made the art in that Inu-Yasha banner.

 

[Queue]

You improved quite a bit but honestly, as a Designer, you'd know to create a design where the reader can actually read the text, the colours don't conflict with each other and your symmetry should be properly aligned. I'd recommend making your black and white banner (Second) in colour, but pick a scheme of 2-3 colours and try to not make them clash. For the third one, align the text to a corner or put it on an angle, also fix the eye flow (How the eyes read the text).

EDIT: Also for the second one, give the objects a tint, showing objects closer as a brighter tint, and the ones further away as a darker on.

 

[zenrdy]

So I should try to make the second In Colour?

 

[Brosek]

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n153 ... by_dis.png[/img]

Comment's On how to make'em better and how terrible they are would be appreciated.

[offtopic]THAT IS HILARIOUS[/offtopic]

There is definitely an improvement.

 

[Cruelty]

looks like you put random vector brushes onto a black background with a cheesy philosophy. :}

 

[Skye_Vrbas]

looks like you put random vector brushes onto a black background with a cheesy philosophy. :}

>> yup

But the compilation of them is nice tough...