It's a good tutorial, but I don't think you can do the one writing guide for everyone... the title already says it - this is Despains method, which suits him. Others won't get along with this at all, while there'll surely be some that'll succeed by doing exactly what he said. Well, and there'll of course people inbetween. Being mainly a writer myself, what I can suggest you is using this as a base (as it's a good one, nonetheless) and build your own style on top of it... there's nothing worse in creative's business than thinking that someone did the perfect guideline and follow it no matter what...