Demon WIP.

[NoNick]

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i started it five minutes ago...
C&C plz. :thumb:

 

[Third333strike]

Hmm Needs some different shades in it, not one solid color

 

[American Hero]

Yes, shading, try it with the hair a littlr bit.

 

[Grathea]

OK, so you can do a palette swap and copy/paste the shorts.
Bravo.

The scythe is better, if only marginally. Try antialiasing or selouting the edges, and giving it more of a metallic sheen on the blade.

 

[NoNick]

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How about this?

 

[eharper256]

The hoe (or is a scythe?) will overlap into the next frame as it stands. He's holding it a bizarre angle in any case, should be more to the side if he's carrying it whilst walking.

Shading is alright, though perhaps 1 extra level of red wouldn't go amiss for proper depth. I like the hair, thats fine: nice charcoal effect.

And the eyes aren't very evil...he just looks sleep deprived rather than full of malice. A slightly narrower gaze, perhaps? Though I'll admit that base RTP eyes have trouble with this.

Still, keep at it!

 

[NoNick]

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Better?
and what are u talking about theres no angel thing..

 

[Souloux]

he doenst mean angel... he means ANGLE as in degrees from a reference point. whats the thing in the other hand? a note or list of some sort?

 

[Russty]

the sythe gonna look weird when he walks lol... u should delete it.. or put it at his back.

 

[Alexander Morou]

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The scythe looks odd and like a hoe because it's too short and thick.  Here's a suggestion for change.