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Daolians Stand: Genesis (Recruiting)

Recruiting Co-Designers PM me


Game Outline


prologue:



A long time ago God sent his holy angels on a mission to earth to protect humans and creatures from evil beings and spread the word of God. These guardian angels were known as the Daolians.

A league of dissatisfied humans who called themselves "The Order Of Chaos" rose up in opposition to the Daolians. They had only one intention, to kill, to seed destruction on earth and to murder every living human that served the Daolians. They began creating a mighty army, a horde of demons. Their ultimate goal was to gain possession of the mystical item called the Luciferus.

Many ages ago, God tried to kill Satan but his evil adversary managed to deflect God's power during their battle into the Luciferus. There, God and Satan's powers remain encased and trapped. Through the ages myths and legends arose concerning the Mystical Luciferus. Many tales say that the one who possesses the object wields ultimate power. If you can find the way to the spirit realm where it is held deep in heaven, guarded by myriads of angels, you will have this power.

After the "Great Discovery" as the The Order of Chaos called it, they began destroying the power of the angels. They forged an invincible spell capable of consuming the power from the mightiest of the angels. Already fallen to their spell are three mighty angels Gabriel, Daniel and Michael.

The devastation of these three made the whole order hungry for more power. The Order of Chaos divided and their rule was dispersed throughout the dimensions. Now they rule everywhere creating misery among the populace. It is their joy to murder, torture and steal from all humans.
All that remains for the followers of the true God is the hope that a hero will be sent to destroy the Order of Chaos and send their minions to a fiery hell.

That was a hundred years ago.


Story:



Present day: The Order of Chaos are still the leaders of earth.
The Order Of Chaos reunite, and they are planing on a plan how to get rid of every human on the 9 dimensions.
The Order Of Chaos have gathered 7 million troops.

David and his friend Jason went camping, when Jason suddenly disappear David start looking for, he meets a man who sends him into another dimension, in the other dimension David meets a powerful good mage, one of the last Daolians.
He tells David what happened, and the only way to return is to kill a member from The Order Of Chaos... The one who stole the powers from on of the most powerful angels, Gabriel.
On his journey David finds the last stand of the Daolians on earth, "The city of angels", where he falls in love with Jasmin.
Join him as he: Age, Learn skills, Fight the powers of The Order Of Chaos.



Characters:


David:
Davidsface.png

Job: Wizard
Race: Human
Look: Not sure.
Age: 15
Outline: David is a young mage.
He always tell the truth and he never backs off from a fight.
When he was 7 hes brother was murdered by a demon, from that day he swore he will kill the demon.
A week ago he was accepted to 'Waldown' the best school for wizards.
A year ago David trained hard for a test, that would say if he would be accepted to pass to the next stage of the test, he trained hard and fainted, next thing he remembers is, him in an archery contest, in a bad, and a young boy near him.
David soon found out it was Jason, and that Jason saved him, since that day they are best friends.
he love adventures and witchcraft.
But hates anyone who disrespect the witchcraft.
Side: Good.

Jason:
Jasonsface.png

Job: Archer
Race: Human
Look: Not sure
Age: 14
Outline: Jason his a young bowman.
He is pure hearted and he will always prefer to bring justice than mercy.
Jason was raised by farmers. when he was 11 he first saw a bow, he became fascinated with bows and start training, today he have won 3 competitions and come second and third in 4.
He met David when he was 13, while he was traveling to a competition, David trained to hard so he fainted on near the road, Jason picked him up and let the tournament medical treat him, since than they are best friends.
He is using long bows and cross bows, but with less accuracy.
He loves to fish and run.
But he hates to sit and do nothing.
Side: Good.

Jasmin:
Jasminsface.png

Job: Dualer
Race: Human
Look: Not sure.
Age: 16
Outline: Jasmin was the girl who discovered the city of angels.
She is very tough and never let are emotions out.
Jasmin was raised in a fortified city, she was never aloud to leave the city, and always had to return home early. In the age of 9 an army broke the walls of the city, that was the first time she saw anything outside the city, she wanted to explore more, and when she was 10 her parents helped her leave the town. 2 years later the town have been destroyed, but her parents survived and now live in Galennia.
She uses dual swords and spears.
She loves a good fight.
But hate to stand down from a fight.
Side: Good.



  Features:


1) Extremely well day and night system.
2) Big party system: A system which lets you have up to 9 party members.
3) Element choosing system: In the start of the game you can choose an element and your character will developer his skills according to the element.
4) Mini bosses.
5) Weapon modes: weapons will be dropped in 3 modes
1) Normal: bought from shops, dropped.
2) Rare: Dropped from monsters rarely.
3) Godly: achieved only from Mini bosses
6) Special inn system: You can buy a ticket and get the inn for the night
7) Books that give information, skills or stats.
8) A gladiator ring: A place you can fight other people.
9) places in caves you can fall into.
10) Town reputation system: The town people will give you quests and at certain reputation (- or +) they will punish / award you.
11) Kill count reward: If you kill a certain amount of monsters you will recieve rewards.
Screen shots:



A small forest I made:

Forestdone-2.jpg


Forest-1.png

Part one of an inn:
Soon

Part 2:

Soon

Me playing with the weather trying to create a good storm graphic on the first map in the game:

Weatherplaying-1.png


A cave I've done while I had a "creativity flow"

Cave.png



Notes: I'll modify the inn maps.
Please comment my work so I'll know what to fix or what I should use again.


Demo:


Soon...

Recruitment

Audio designers: Need a few.
Event makers:  One I don't have too much
Script writers: Don't care how many.
Tile sets and sprite designers: Don't care how many.


Credits


If theres anyone I forgot or missed something he did please inform me of

that and I will add you ASAP.


Marien: Sprites and some help, tester, Map Cosmetic lighting maker.
Oracle: A lot of great ideas and some motivation, Story writer although I said I won't add story writers she gave me so many good ideas that I couldn't say no.
Shaz: The awesome day and night system.
Bryce: A lot of help.
Testers: Dear testers please post here again to let me make sure your still "In".
Already said there in: Oracle, Wybrich,
Amanda: Vehicle system.
Pandaba: Help.
Brew: Help.
Nick: Some help and the world map tile set, Map checking.
(she who is not to be named): UMS, Sun Light Effect.
Love: Help, Map checking, story checking.
Calibre from RMXP: The Cosmetic light tutorial.
Zanyzora: Tile sets.
Love: Some help and story checking.
Amaranth Games: World map.
Wybrich: Side quest writer.
Kstar366: Map designer.
Dr_Doctor from RMRK: A resource pack.
Nouman from RMRM: Same as above.
Blizzard from RMRK: Same as above.
Mack: Tile sets
Brewmeiser: Kill count scripte, game time script.




All credits are from the view point of http://www.Amaranthia.com
Thanks, David.
 
At least your mapping is good.

what. it's not HORRIBLE but it's not good at all.

nothing about this seems really great. your grammar is absolutely horrible (i have seenw orse but come on put some effort into your games).

also it'scute that you've made a game about you and your friend but this is never really a great route to take when making somthing serious. if this is your first game and you're just making something fun to learn the program though then good luck with it. :)
 
Good. Although I suggest you work on that title a bit, while it is impossible to avoid being clich'e, you could at least make the title a bit more intriuging. Also, killing an evil mage? Rescuing his friend? Falling in love? Been there, done that. Surely you could make a more draw-in summary of the game (presuming, of course, that there is content in this game outside of this overused base (right now, I think it needs it)). A character can be simply good/evil? That's up to perspective, it would do you a world of good to just remove that. City of angels? *coughFinalFantasycough* A girl named Jasmine? Where have I heard that one before? A character who is all good and happy sunshine? At least witch is a bit of a nice twist on it. And what about this mage? Not only does the antagonist always deserve a spot in the characters section, he can't be evil just for the purpose of being evil. None of the characters looks are finalized yet, sounds like nothing in this game is set in stone. I suppose it's only a cooncidence all of the main characters like a good fight, and that will just "happen" to lead to long monster killing dungeons. Not often does one see a person who enjoys brawling. It sounds easy to implement sure, but have you ever enjoyed being hit? How about hitting someone back? It's not something people will enjoy. And please don't switch the sides completely and say that they fight to stop war and suffering. Like I said, that's old and boring. I see a crystal in one of the screenshots. And talk about a potion. Blech. The crabgrass grows more in the river then it does on land? I mean, crabgrass can survive fine in the water, but it just being only there and no where else is strange, no? I would critique more, but that's all the information I can go by, unfortunately, the more information I can get about a character the better.
 
By the way, that inn is absolutely MASSIVE. Maybe scale it down a bit so it doesn't seem so empty. Also, using spoilers in your thread and making the font a bit smaller could help make it a lot easier.

Also, I've never heard of the game title. Is this a remake of a real game? If so, which game? And the story is way too short, as well as (like KRoP mentioned) extremely cliche'd. If it's one of your first games, then making a game like this is really a great way to learn the program, however. Best of luck.
 
Well, I personally like the maps, but I guess it's up to opinion. Kind of reminds of the Blacksmith's Apprentice for some reason.
 
Your outdoor mapping isn't bad at all, but your indoors need serious work.

Seriously, I have never been to an inn that was a big square room about 20 times the size of a couch or had a table roughly 4 times as big as a couch. Tables are usually smaller than couches.
 
I want to clear some points:
1) Yes this is my first game.
2) Don't worry giving me bad critiques, I need those stuff to help me improve myself.
3) I would work on the couch thing.
4) Sorry about the big wiriting and not using spoilers, added now.
5) What is a dash script.
 
DavidDaKing":2leyn7zp said:
I want to clear some points:
1) Yes this is my first game.
2) Don't worry giving me bad critiques, I need those stuff to help me improve myself.
3) I would work on the couch thing.
4) Sorry about the big wiriting and not using spoilers, added now.
5) What is a dash script.
It lets you dash when you press a button. It would be easier to do with events. Try the tutorials board.
 

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RojoBo":3h74n7px said:
Hey You almost killed my internet it would help if you put the pics in spoilers
Um... Protip: Anything inside a spoiler still loads on the page. All the spoiler does is hide it from view.
 
I didn't say to do anything with the couches, just don't make the room so big. Make the room proportionate to the couches, tables, e.t.c.
 
That's a good thing, because it's way too big right now.

The space between the entrance to the counter (Where I assume the inn NPC will be) shouldn't be more than like 10 tiles, at maximum.
 

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