Crits please

[ramonbastos]

Hi guys, im thinking about sprite again.. but im not a good spriter xD
bla bla bla bla



So, should i continue?

(it was a five mins sprite)

 

[MistTribe]

Awww you don't know good enlish. That's so cute. Umm as for the sprites, they look pretty good to me. Except the big ol' shiney spot on their heads.

 

[ramonbastos]

awww thanks xD

err.. i used the head from Green Raven template, don´t u like it? =/

 

[Sonata]

The head looks fine. I say you go ahead and continue, it looks like a solid edit.

 

[ramonbastos]

Thanks Sonata, ill go ahead then.

 

[Dean]

er... they look pretty good, but you probably should have checked with Green Raven and asked if you could use his template's head or not before doing so, if you hadn't already. =s

 

[The Panda]

You don't need permission to make variations of a template O.o now if these were a completely new template then yeah but since they're just Breeze edits it's fine.
They look great RB! Only thing I can really say is fix the really big muscular one's arm outline , since the little spot where it sticks out looks odd, and add one or two pixels of shading on his pecs. Right now they look flat. But other than that great work :thumb:

 

[green raven]

1. what's with the crotch?
2. Why did you change the shades and darkest outline to black?
3. arms are a bit undefined..
4. lacks shading
5. muscles tend to look more like boobs
6. why would you continue this, I honestly don't think anyone but you will use them. You'de better try to create some characters, because that would take more skill than making some quick edits to a template


please don't take this personally it is just critisism and my personal opinion..

 

[ramonbastos]

that sok GR, i know u dan co MUCH better in 2 mins.. but im not great as u =/
I'll continue cuz ill use them =]
i didnt changed to black Oo

 

[green raven]

the point is not that I could do better, but that you should improve it
And if you will use it you should continue anyway.

edit: *zooms* aaahh it must be the white background that makes it look black

 

[Xaixis]

I think they look solid, but then again I'm not to swell at spriting myself so my opinion is definitely a lower bar then some.

 

[green raven]

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... uscles.png[/imgzoom]

ya.. I don't think the little edits you made will have any use actually, because you sprite over it you won't see the edit you did..

 

[Despain]

USE

FUCKING

IMAGEZOOM

THIS IS THE LAST FUCKING TIME IM GOING TO TELL YOU

 

[green raven]

why should I use imagezoom if the image doesn't need critiquing

 

[JosephSeraph]

To better the muscles use an lighter brown in its definition,and don´t divide them !

Just my thoughts,though

And...  WOW!   Greenhaven is an sadic critique O_O

Uhm, that is good,you know. Solid cricticism. 


P.S:  Not wanting to be...  irritating,but...  not all persons in the world like to hear words such as
Fucking,shit,etc....  Thanks...

 

[mawk]

Imagezoom isn't just for critique, it helps to see the pixel work itself in more detail. Seeing as the entire purpose (I presume) of you posting these example sprites is to provide others with an example to base further work off of, then the imagezoom tag is more than appropriate.

Short version, imagezoom should be used for all posted sprites regardless of intent.

 

[JosephSeraph]

I dont know if this is flooding, but....  he IS right..... 

 

[mawk]

who is? why?

also, we except our members to be mature enough to handle swearing -- we don't have a censorship policy in place, because it would be awkward, pointless, and against the general demographic this forum is aimed at (by which I mean that this isn't a forum for little kids.)

 

[JosephSeraph]

ou´re right.  YOU, Miek.