Criticism Wanted

[Emerson]

Okay, this is my first attempt at a Faceset without direct spriting.
The character's generic, I know that, and I have no idea where I was going with the hair. C&C on anything other than that please.
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1595/facebug8.png[/img]

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Hmmm...you might want to define the eyes a bit more. They seem to blend in a little too much. I suggest making the outlines a little more bold. The same can be said for the mouth.

And the eyes looks pretty lifeless...You can't really see the pupil. Maybe make the pupils black? I'm no master artist or anything, just from an amateur's point of view. It's pretty good though.

 

[Arkotrath]

Good job as a first attempt, but you need to show more mouth, and as Dadevster said, define the eyes.