Critic My Latest Spriting

[Danny]

Alright, I've been doing some sprite work lately and I want feedback. Plain and simple just give it to me straight on anything I post.

http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/1630 ... rtptx0.png[/IMG]
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3011 ... ersvf8.png[/IMG]
^For Selwyn's Project
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4986/kephrizy1.png[/IMG]
^Part of my FlyFF Guild Sig. I think shading has suffered due to detail, so tips please.
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8927/evegagazm0.png[/IMG]
^Evega originally done by Despain on the Gerdreth, converted to GA.
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8854 ... eetaa5.png[/IMG]
^I got working on a hooded version of Reonim after looking at a faceset by Despain. I think the shape on the middle to lower right side seems strange.
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3047 ... c6cnf3.png[/IMG]
^PA entry. Give me tips to improve it, mainly on the female.

That's all for now, I appreciate any advice given.

 

[Chaosg1]

Evega Is Awesome! In matter of fact every single of them Are great, But the Faces, I think that the red thing on the face Is a bit Strange I dunno why, but...

 

[Noobitron]

Wow, your really get better at spriting hydrolic. Keep up this and you will be able to make tilesets like SK.

 

[Danny]

Evega Is Awesome! In matter of fact every single of them Are great, But the Faces, I think that the red thing on the face Is a bit Strange I dunno why, but...

Thanks you, Evega is my favourite character of Despains, thats why I enjoyed converting him to that template. The red thing on the facesets is a mask thing made from material.

Wow, your really get better at spriting hydrolic. Keep up this and you will be able to make tilesets like SK.

Cheers, Tilesets is something I assume I'll move onto sooner or later, my main goal at the moment is to perfect my spriting technique. I currently started on a tileset, but it was only two small stones. I may post it here later.

 

[Kiniko]

They all look great. I love the new facesets you did for Reonim.