Constructive criticism anyone?

[Waiise]

Hey, just want some c&c on these few drawings, anything from the whole composition to small nitpicky details.
If you don't like one or more of my drawings, write more than just your disapproval of them, you're probably
mature enough to not be told this, but I've had some fun experiences in the past. Anyhow, hope you like them!

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Spoiler: Random Character Design

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Spoiler: Indiana Croft

Studying archaeology, we always have silly jokes about indiana jones and lara croft

Spoiler: Ms.Fixit

Spoiler: racer

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Spoiler: Zombie (10 min sketch)

Spoiler: just for fun

There's no "e" missing at the end of the word, it's just "smile" in Norwegian

 

[Jason]

Holy shit, did Steve Buscemi get a haircut?

I quite like the style of these, especially Indiana Croft, there's something about it that I like.

Can't really see anything bad, or not at the moment atleast, but maybe someone else will pick up on something.

 

[Waiise]

Thanks!
I also updated with a new drawing! Check first post

 

[Jason]

Ooh I like the new drawing, it's funny because I've just been playing Kingdom Hearts 2 like a few hours ago, and now I'm playing WoW, and he sort of looks like if Axel was a Rogue on WoW, haha.

My "complaint" on it would be that the legs seem really odd, the left one looks extremely long, whereas the one on the right looks short, fat and stumpy, and the joint between them looks like a front bum.

I know what you were going for pose-wise, but from my eyes, you haven't quite hit the nail on the head.

 

[Waiise]

Thanks, drawing legs like that is like my worst nightmare, but I won't get better if I don't try do I? I'll try to do better on the next drawing with similar pose!

Oh, and yeah, he reminded me of Axel as well :p

 

[NexS]

i agree. i like the style.. it's very... how shall i say... animated cartoon.
lovely