Concept art and tilesets for game

[Exkimo_Kidd]

Hey! These are my resources I've made so far for my game. There not all done yet, but I brought them here for some critique :biggrin:
The thing I'm most proud of so far is the billboard which I made in paint shop pro and then resized.
I am getting rid of the fountain because it pops out too much compared to the other stuff and it's textures are terrible, so pay no mind to it ^^
tileset1(old):

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Tileset2 This one is newer and I like It a lot more. I felt like experimenting with flash and noticed you could put grids in so I made this for my game :9

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it will be blurry if you have firefox like me XD lol

sorry for the trouble but you'll have to zoom in. :biggrin: and the quality might be terrible.
More stuff:
Here is two concept titles that I've made.

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This one is older and not enlarged :grin:

some character designs:

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Raine:

Allan:

Raine's Character design has changed since then into this:

which of Raine's design's fit more?
Raine her work clothes:

Character sprites

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These are done with the half kaizer template :p I know this probably should go in pixel art analysis, but i didnt want to make too many new threads, so I'm putting it here for now ^^

That's the first sprite I haven't done half assed...So It took longer than I thought! XD

Concept art for areas in the game:

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A bustling and polluted city:

Also, On another note, I'm sure nobody will use these but just in case please don't

 

[Admiral David]

the tileset you're creating seems like it needs just a little more lighting, i'm not sure what characters you're using for you're game but the rtp's lighting shows up from the left. just thought i'd mention that cause your 2nd television in the tileset was from the right but that just depends on where you want your light to come from.

The 2 Characters Designs look amazing to me, I like the checkerd look as long as its limited like that. the girl character really caught my eye. but ya, hope to see more of characters in the future

 

[Perihelion]

Hey, very slick character designs! I like the smooth cel-shaded look, and Raine in particular stands out as some quality artwork. Allan's hair could use more contrast and form definition, though. It's kind of scribbly and poorly defined as you have it now; try having the clumps smoother and more orderly. The elbow on his left arm is really low, too.

Also, to prevent Photobucket from murdering your images, save as .png and upload. You can do this in Paint without quality loss. I also recommend cropping the blank space before uploading so it's easier to look at!

 

[Exkimo_Kidd]

the tileset you're creating seems like it needs just a little more lighting, i'm not sure what characters you're using for you're game but the rtp's lighting shows up from the left. just thought i'd mention that cause your 2nd television in the tileset was from the right but that just depends on where you want your light to come from.

The 2 Characters Designs look amazing to me, I like the checkerd look as long as its limited like that. the girl character really caught my eye. but ya, hope to see more of characters in the future

thank you! :biggrin: I'm using the Half kaizer template, so do you have any suggestions on lighting for that particular template? :grin: