[Comment&Critic][WIP] "Unnamed Project" Custom Tileset

[Eriol Clowphengire]

The following tileset posted in this thread belongs to an unnamed game that made DESU! to be cancelled. Please do not use the provided tileset for it's still a work-in-progress and it must be used first in its respective game.


^ This is The Hive being referred to by the 1st hint.

The project is hinted as follows:
"Big Brother house has The Hive underneath!"
"Do you wanna keep your own Pamela Anderson and/or Maria Ozawa without payin' them for a visit?"
"15 girls, one house, battling for fame and fortune, and their beauties might be their best asset?"


"What the hell, they're beatin' up my clones?"
~the unnamed game's main character.

This game is planned to be done in three languages: English (1st!), Filipino and Japanese
Meaning, the Japanese version might need moar than just several Babelfish usage though not unless there's a Japanese-English person who'll help me.

Note that this game is supposed to be R-16, the CAPTAIN OBVIOUS hint would be the tortured clones in it!

~This game is a Ryona

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

I'm bumpin' this for criticism and help... forgive me. 43 views and yet no one even commented to this...

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

73 Views and no comments... *sigh* boring as a poring these days...

 

[irukard]

73 Views and no comments... *sigh* boring as a poring these days...

So what exactly do you want to hear?

IMHO this tileset sucks. Why?

1. Lack of details
2. Inconsistent perspective
3. Wrong shading according to light source

 

[Illitum]

I swear I remember posting here... The dithering is too in your face, use more similar colours to make it less hard on the eyes, looks like you've copied and pasted the left and right diagonal sides of the tower / wall thing. You've used 4 tiles for the spikes when clearly they should be a character set... why?

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

Yeah, I'm gonna take out the spikes soon. Anyways, they're still work in progress.

I admit I photoshopped the wall and merely used brightness&contrast function.

Plus, the light post thingy might have its pillar version as well.

@irukard: which of those objects have wrong shading? and I need some of your tips as well, or even your rendition of my tileset.

Note that it's supposed to be a laboratory with death traps.

 

[irukard]

Edit:

Here is a sample of wall shading from one of mine tilesets.

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

Apparently, some of the girls there are meant to be as lying corpses or sleeping clones... and the girls in shackles are meant to be placed in front of the wall.

 

[Sgt. Cookie]

Are you a fan of Elfin Lied? Cos thats what this tile set reminds me of.

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

Not much, and that tileset's meant to be bloody, and it has lots of death traps, and laboratory stuff used to clone the girls...

 

[Sgt. Cookie]

Well ok probably just coincidence. But still WATCH IT its bloody brilliant. No pun intended. Well maybe half intended. The death traps should be an event as from what I see the spikes are going to be animated and the best way to do that is to have them as a chara set.