colorinpractict PAINTING

[Despain]

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wumpi's sketch

clearly WIP

 

[Totti]

That's pretty sweet, but the coloring style of the eyes is really glossy, and the rest of him, it's sort of sketchy.

 

[Venetia]

if the collarbones are showing that much highlight, they'd be large enough to cast a shadow. youshould also add a SMALL amount of highlight for the adam's apple, or if there is no prominent one, the neck between the jugulars still wouldn't go in that deeply on such a thin/not muscular man.

degloss the eyes some, and dont forget shading on the whites under the eyelids.

 

[Despain]

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[Venetia]

that was fast

yes looks better.

 

[Totti]

Yeah, the eyes match the rest of the image now.  The collor bones look great now, too.

 

[CeruSkye]

I like him. Wai macho! XD

 

[Despain]

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i stretched out his body to make him fit the character a bit better. her drawing was a bit stouter than i wanted

 

[Avadan]

You should make the union of the sternon with the clavicles, stand out more...


...and the nose, it looks like he crashed with a door or something... !!... or is he Voldermort!!

 

[Venetia]

ohhh yeah, there's no shading in the nose bridge or highlight on the tip. i thought something looked flat about his face

 

[Mascarpone]

The outlines break everythign into peices, rather than making it all into one solid face.

or is this only somthing that i'm seeing.

 

[Avadan]

You should probably loose the line of the sternomastoids and make them stand out with shadows...

And id say move the eyes, they are to separated from each other... but I guess thats Wumpis drawing style

 

[badmonur]

My only advice is to put some blood behind that skin and give him some subtle skin tones. It makes a world of difference

 

[Despain]

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[CeruSkye]

He's coming along great. He needs more shadow under his nose, and I think his mouth could be a bit wider. Just a tad.