Character set

[zchin]

This is a character for my game, the person for now, is not a mage of any sort, more like a thief, or rogue. Any comments would be appreciated.
Warning: Very bright background

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Thank you and have a nice day!

 

[zedeem]

It should have more darker clothes if its a rouge/thief. Other than that, it pretty cool!

 

[Jason]

You need more contrast, that's the first thing I notice.

Spoiler: Infact, I've said you the time, see what you think

I've basically just added more contrast to the sprite, as well as roundening the top of the hood, and fixed some of the shading on the robe itself.

The only other thing I see wrong, is that she seems to be looking up? Is this intentional or error? If it's an error, just lower the eyes a few pixels.

 

[zchin]

Hmm, I guess the contrast is needed, and I didn't notice the eyes at all >.<
thanks for the critique guys.

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[Jason]

!melborp oN

?he ,won sdarwkcab ginklat erew os hO

 

[zchin]

...won cipot ffo elttil a gnitteg si siht tuB .egassem eht tog uoy gnipoh saw I ,haeY

!yad ecin a evah dna uoy knahT