Created By Connor
Please tell me what you think of it. and give some advise if needed
Itzan has been a peaceful land for 100years. It is divided into 4 different countries: Ice, Wind, Sand and Earth. But an evil organisation called the Black Hand has appeared. 4 henchmen and their leader.
A young boy travels to Kona Village to take the Jurian exams to become a fully-fledged warrior. Along with Arzues, Emily, Valon and Ciara, he makes a group called "Falco". Later Yamus finds out that he and Arzues is a member of the Black Hand and that Yamus has the most powerful ceature living inside him. Yamus, Valon, Emily and Ciara embark on a quest to destory the Black Hand and take back Arzues.
A young boy travels to Kona Village to take the Jurian exams to become a fully-fledged warrior. Along with Arzues, Emily, Valon and Ciara, he makes a group called "Falco". Later Yamus finds out that he and Arzues is a member of the Black Hand and that Yamus has the most powerful ceature living inside him. Yamus, Valon, Emily and Ciara embark on a quest to destory the Black Hand and take back Arzues.
Yamus Terr, Age: 23
An energitic,ambitous,determined young male who wants to become the best! He finds out that he was a member of the Black Hand and that he has the most powerful ceature living inside him.
Emily Warheart, Age: 21
A kind-heart magician who seems to be close to Yamus. Her parents died wen she was a baby and she was fostered by Kona Village's Elder.
Valon Namo, Age: 27
A self-confident, spoiled "prick" (as Yamus calls him)
He is specialised in earth magic and has the Pentagram Sealing Magic(Best Sealing Magic).
Ciara Lock, Age: 16
A shy young priest that doesn't have a very special life.
Arzues Slade, Age: 23
A quiet, skilled person who carries two swords. He uses Ice magic. He is a member of that Black Hand sent to spy on Yamus.
Savelion, Age: Unknown
Not that much people know of he exsists. He is extremely powerful and is the leader of the Black Hand.
His goal is unknown to anyone.
An energitic,ambitous,determined young male who wants to become the best! He finds out that he was a member of the Black Hand and that he has the most powerful ceature living inside him.
Emily Warheart, Age: 21
A kind-heart magician who seems to be close to Yamus. Her parents died wen she was a baby and she was fostered by Kona Village's Elder.
Valon Namo, Age: 27
A self-confident, spoiled "prick" (as Yamus calls him)
He is specialised in earth magic and has the Pentagram Sealing Magic(Best Sealing Magic).
Ciara Lock, Age: 16
A shy young priest that doesn't have a very special life.
Arzues Slade, Age: 23
A quiet, skilled person who carries two swords. He uses Ice magic. He is a member of that Black Hand sent to spy on Yamus.
Savelion, Age: Unknown
Not that much people know of he exsists. He is extremely powerful and is the leader of the Black Hand.
His goal is unknown to anyone.
Itzan
Kona Village
Terrian City
Black Hand Castle
Kona Village
Terrian City
Black Hand Castle
http://www.arpgmaker.com/threads/66637
Please tell me what you think of it. and give some advise if needed