C&C on Title Screen

[Loofah]

Any ways, a long time back, I started writing the story for a futuristic RPG, I made quite a lot of progress, mainly with character development races weapons technologies etc, but I could never finalise the story, anyways about a month back I decided to resume the project, leading to this title screen.

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa23 ... e2copy.png[/img]

C&C is welcome :tongue:

Edit: Much lower quality animated Gif ( Same quality as still frame ingame, also smoother animation)
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa23 ... imated.gif[/img]

 

[Zekallinos]

Your titlescreen is rather disturbing. Half of the screen is just that big big greenish planet. You need to think about balance a little. The title should at least be at the 2/3 of the screen (in height), not just crushed there. And it's a little hard to read, make it bigger, as big as your logo thing at least. Another thing which bothers me is around the origin of the spark. The five dots with lines connecting them. It really doesn't look good. Otherwise, it could be nice if you work on it, keep it up  :straightthumb:.

 

[RavenTDA]

Yeah what I would do is lower the view of the planet and make the light most of the picture more. Of course he's leaving room for the usual start/continue/exit bit.

 

[Loofah]

OK, I can see what you mean by the logo being a bit small, anyways, heres a screenshot ingame-

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa23 ... reenie.png[/img]

 

[Dark_linis]

What is the game about? Just being futuristic isn't enough.
Your title screen doesn't have that "professional" look too it.

I think a title screen should say something at least remotely clear about the game.

um... unless its about a gigantic snake/dragon shooting lightning out of its mouth while on a green planet.

 

[Loofah]

What is the game about? Just being futuristic isn't enough.
Your title screen doesn't have that "professional" look too it.

I think a title screen should say something at least remotely clear about the game.

um... unless its about a gigantic snake/dragon shooting lightning out of its mouth while on a green planet.

I don't see why I have to be specific, I wanted critisism on the graphics part of it, lots of game's title screen only give a small snippet as to what the game is about. Besides, this title has a lot to do with the game.

 

[Zekallinos]

I figured you would have the 3 options on the empty space, but it contrasts even more with the small logo. Also, do you really need such a huge font for your options?