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Bunch of Shit

DJ

Some guy that did RMXP before
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Yeah Hi guys. I was out of here for a long time...
Now Dumping some new shits with improved skills..

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I was messin' up with this for a long time,
Finally give up when I finished the face.
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my friend requested a character to me, So this is what I done for him.
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Working on, Improved sketch. Needs more coloring

I can't draw really good drawings.
Take a look at 'em and give some critiques.

in this time, there's only 3, but I'll update more pics soon.
 
dont like curly lines on top eyebrows. triangle chin stand out bad. eyes are good

youd get more comment if you think of it more than bunch of shit. people wont open post with topic like it
 

DJ

Some guy that did RMXP before
Member

SolstICE":1tnkxfyk said:
dont like curly lines on top eyebrows. triangle chin stand out bad. eyes are good

youd get more comment if you think of it more than bunch of shit. people wont open post with topic like it
Fuck Yeah New shit!
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DJ

Some guy that did RMXP before
Member

Mascarpone":g2tm6rx8 said:
Faces are too pointy o_O this isn't the 90's.
Which one ;;To be specific man that's too simple for critique :mad:
and Fuck yeah this isn't 90's idiot drawings this is drawn in 2009
(I understand you're saying about my style but I didn't really get the point
write longer, o_O man :P)
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LOL my style could be strange to you guys;;
This style is popular in my nation(Korea) but not very known in here(maybe not?)
 
you mean south korea right

HA

HAHAHA

EVERYBODY KNOWS NORTH KOREA IS THE REAL KOREA south korea is illegal and north korea is a better countrys
 
Is bad use of "fuck" popular in your country as well? Chill out on the expletives dude, you suck at using them. As for your art, it's mediocre at best. I understand the medium is fairly popular in your region, but drawing manga/anime is a pointless hobby. It doesn't develop any major art skills, it looks cheap and lame, and is an overall shitty art form. I drew it for the longest time, and since quitting and starting to adapt a newer style I have not only improved as an artist but have become more creative.

If you wish to continue to draw this garbage art form then I can tell you that you need to refine the shape of your faces to show more form. All you have is the standard stereotypical egg head. Arshes could easily be a girl, and the girl you have could easily be a boy and vice versa. Try and develop your own unique style as well. It's plain to see your fresh from a "How to Manga Vol. 1233" book. It's bland and retarded. Once you've developed a style you can start to hone your creativity and make some more interesting pieces. While I despise manga/anime, you can make some really cool pieces with it if you have a unique style.

I feel like I've tore you a new one, but I felt it was entirely necessary. Your work is bland, boring, unoriginal, and makes me want to cry. Your title sums it up, it's just a bunch of shit that I see here.
 

DJ

Some guy that did RMXP before
Member

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD":2ip8uf1e said:
you mean south korea right

HA

HAHAHA

EVERYBODY KNOWS NORTH KOREA IS THE REAL KOREA south korea is illegal and north korea is a better countrys
What;;
North Korea is doing worse than South, Citizens starve in North
Mundane":2ip8uf1e said:
Is bad use of "fuck" popular in your country as well? Chill out on the expletives dude, you suck at using them. As for your art, it's mediocre at best. I understand the medium is fairly popular in your region, but drawing manga/anime is a pointless hobby. It doesn't develop any major art skills, it looks cheap and lame, and is an overall shitty art form. I drew it for the longest time, and since quitting and starting to adapt a newer style I have not only improved as an artist but have become more creative.

If you wish to continue to draw this garbage art form then I can tell you that you need to refine the shape of your faces to show more form. All you have is the standard stereotypical egg head. Arshes could easily be a girl, and the girl you have could easily be a boy and vice versa. Try and develop your own unique style as well. It's plain to see your fresh from a "How to Manga Vol. 1233" book. It's bland and retarded. Once you've developed a style you can start to hone your creativity and make some more interesting pieces. While I despise manga/anime, you can make some really cool pieces with it if you have a unique style.

I feel like I've tore you a new one, but I felt it was entirely necessary. Your work is bland, boring, unoriginal, and makes me want to cry. Your title sums it up, it's just a bunch of shit that I see here.
You see a bunch of shit?
alright, because i am roooookie.....my arts are 'SHIT'
and U said about Unique Style? It is based on manga , but it is my unique style at all.
sorry about using "FUCK". and I know manga styles are not really good hobby at all,
But just think! it is an kind of art style. I know they usually looks cheap, but that's not
always right;.

And so? You think it is really bad that makes you to cry?
Okay,I think I'll never post anything in this board. You never gonna find my name here.
 
Chillax kids.

This is screaming for a lock, and if this artist really is gone forever then there's no reason for anyone to even respond to him so let's just drop it at that.
 
DJ: Easy there Tiger.

Mundane: Don't be a prick because it's easy to do in this particular thread. I probably shouldn't throw stones in my house but really, in addition to everything DJ's got some serious language barrier issues and you've said nothing particularly specific or helpful.

It also goes to note that despite the fact that these are not particularly masterful in any sense, it IS in fact much improved over DJ's earlier submitted art several months back.

Harsh criticism is one thing but you've offered nothing but insult. You are not edgy or interesting or intellectually superior because you can upset a young Korean kid.

Edit: I started typing this before Mucky posted his comment.
 

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