Breeze Link

[The Panda]

Doing a little more Breeze spriting, how's it look so far?

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s194 ... zeLink.png[/img]

C&C? ^_^

 

[Toshi]

It looks really cute!
But I think its to flat at the body... Maybe u should add more dark shades...

 

[The Panda]

You mean just use darker colors or add in another darker color?
(Very new at this xD)

 

[Toshi]

I'll never worked with this template before, but I would make him something like that:
http://imagesload.net/daten_no/12123657 ... MTHING.png[/img]

 

[The Data Mage]

The hair doesn't look right in color... it's to hard to distinguish in my opionion and something about the face coloring makes the dark blue bottom two pixels of the left eye look strange.

Also... NEVER mirror eyes... remember that there is one light source so both the light spots on the eyes should be at the same side..

Overall though, I have to say I like it, nice shape, liking the the clothing coloring and design. Keep it up. ^_^

 

[The Panda]

Updated ^_^
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s194 ... /Link2.png[/img]

Fixed the eye color issue
Chest is shaded more
Gave him Gloves
Tried out some new pallettes
C&C? =)

 

[Toshi]

Nice to see that u took my shadingversion and I like the colours, but I think u should use the original colours from Minish Cap Link.

 

[The Panda]

Nice to see that u took my shadingversion and I like the colours, but I think u should use the original colours from Minish Cap Link.

Hmmm... I don't think that'd work for two reasons
1. I can't stand MC Link's colors, they're just a little too saturated for me XD
2. MC Link only uses 2-3 Colors per pallette, Breeze takes 4-5 so I'd have to go through and find more colors too match the pallettes from MC, and then I'd probably not use them anyways since I hate how bright they are XD

 

[The Data Mage]

I would take the gloves away once more... I personally preferred it without...

I've just noticed how much the hair and the ears blend for a crusty the clown effect...

Brighten the hair or darken its outline... then remove the top pixels from the ears, they just seem odd.

keep going with it though

 

[The Panda]

I would take the gloves away once more... I personally preferred it without...

I've just noticed how much the hair and the ears blend for a crusty the clown effect...

Brighten the hair or darken its outline... then remove the top pixels from the ears, they just seem odd.

keep going with it though

Alrighty, I took out the gloves, wasn't too sure about them myself. I also fixed that point on the ears, idk how it got there but it wasn't supposed to be there at all 0_o
I can't get that clown effect with the hair and ears to go away though no matter what I do =/
And added the downward movement poses, I hope they're okay since I've never tried to do any movement poses before, everything I've done has always been first frames...

 

[The Data Mage]

Looking really good. The only thing i can suggest to get rid of the clown effect would be to possibly replace the ear shading pixel with the color of the hair outline to make the hair clearly defined and seperate from the ear? I wouldnt know but with the update i must say. Briliant work.

 

[The Panda]

Update! ^_^

Darkened the outline and lightened the shading on th hair to try to make it stand out a bit more, it's getting better.. And I went ahead and finished the other frames too!

C&C please?

 

[The Data Mage]

Love it, though his hat's tip might want to bounce a little on the 2nd and 4th frames on the side views

 

[Axerax]

Personally I think his hair should stick out some (the bangs) on side views and I also agree the hood should bounce some cause I know it pretty much floats in the wind when riding on empona and doing multiple other actions in the games.

 

[The Data Mage]

Its Epona :p ^_^

 

[Surmuck]

I like the colors you used, and agree that you might try to nix the gloves; as I think he looks a lot better without them. Love it though.

 

[xinrua]

I thought link wore white under clothing?

Don't get me wrong, but he needs some white showing on the wrist and on the feet.
And were are his gloves?
He has brown gloves....

EDIT: I don't know but it just seems like he is wearing a dress and not a *..man..* skirt.

EDIT: Hmm...maybe the gloves might not work, but I am not sure...

 

[Axerax]

I thought link wore white under clothing?

Don't get me wrong, but he needs some white showing on the wrist and on the feet.
And were are his gloves?
He has brown gloves....

EDIT: I don't know but it just seems like he is wearing a dress and not a *..man..* skirt.

EDIT: Hmm...maybe the gloves might not work, but I am not sure...

Link doesn't wear gloves, they are leather padded gauntlets. He also wears leather studded boots. The correct name for the apparel that Link wears is called a Tunic, It is a 1 piece shirt and skirt combo thing, he does wear a white undershirt and in some games it was a chainmail shirt. He also wears light greyish brown slacks covered by his tunic and boots which are almost up to his knees. Maybe this will give you more of an idea of how to design Link.

 

[bojjenclon]

On the side view go from the beret look to more of a night cap.