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BOK - The Hour Of Destruction (demo)

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shadowbutterfly93

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I am currently working on a rpg called Blood of kavalar - The Hour of destruction...

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http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo78/Shadowbutterfly93/You.jpg[/img] You: This is you, a young boy, 17 years old with a keen intrest in sword fighting and duels... You have been wanting to see your father for months now.. and it seems you may just of found a way...You are 5 months younger that Sarah but 3 months older than Mike... Sarah does not realise but you have had a crush on her for months now but is too shy to tell...

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo78 ... /Sarah.jpg[/img] Sarah: This is Sarah, a kind girl but does not like to waste time. She is 17 but is 5 months older than you and 8 Months older than Mike. Sarah wants to go to Thestador to see what they have to buy... she always seems to buy the newest thing... just to impress her friends... but seeing that You wanted to go to... Sarah has been helping to work out a way to go with your help...

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo78 ... 3/Mike.jpg[/img] Mike: This is Mike, Sarahs cousin. Mike enjoys his life in Valiu but too wants to see the world... seeing that Sarah wants to go... he tags along and meets you too... Mike and you are best friends now.. even tho Mike can be quite anoying sometimes...

For 75 years The Corrupted Empire, The Kavalar Empire  and The Bornor Empire have been at war...
For 75 years many people have died.. innocent and non...
For 75 years they were all ballanced...
Untill...

The Corrupted had came across a new Deolnea Artifact which was hidden away in a Kavalar Tomb,
The Unknowing Kavalar Empire stood and waited to see why The Corrupted were silence.
Their waiting war rewarded,
but not in their favor...

In the center of the wastelands,
across the Castida Swamps,
The Spire was Active...

The Spire Caused many deaths and the earth itself changed before it. For Ten thousand years... The Spire infected the world with its creatures...
But One year.. on the last day of the year... The Spire.. just stopped!
After a few hours.. hundreds of people gathered around the spire to see what was going on...
suddenly... a cloaked figure came out of the spire, gave a shard of some sort of crystal to the prince who was there and said,
"Keep this safe.. keep this hidden.. for there are those who would want the spire back..."
The Spire, Page 12, 1463

For The Demo... Click on me to go...

Tell me what you think of it :)
 

Luthur

Sponsor

1,408
This really is not enough for project discussion. Please read the rules at the top of the forum. You need to add storyline, characters, and some other information about your game. From the screenshots, your game doesn't look too bad. The mapping is a bit bland, I suggest you read some mapping tutorials.
 

mawk

Sponsor

3,480
You can't just toss a link in your project thread and call it a day; your project thread should be your base of operations on the forum, so you gotta put the information in the thread itself.

Besides, from a marketing perspective, people are going to be more reluctant to get into your game if they have to do a lot of mucking about to get to the details.

Please read the section rules and fix your topic up within the next 24 hours.
 

Desecration

Member

326
Well I thought I'd give it a go, as although clichè it seemed solid. Though when I tried to download it, I was hit by a big fat 120mb download so I decided not to. How the hell is your game 120mb only for a partially completed demo? From what I saw in the mapping it doesn't have amazing artwork (though the army of arshes made me chuckle), don't get me wrong I like the RTP but you must have included it 3 or 4 times for it to be this size. I guess its music? Or something like that, take a look at the tutorial on how to cut your games size in the tutorial sub-forum, it'll do wonders and most likely bring a lot more testers your way.

Fix the downloadsize and work a tad on your mapping, its not bad but it could be improved very easily with a bit of time and effort. Good luck on your game.
 

shadowbutterfly93

Member

115
The Map Helper":2q4m4978 said:
I like your battle system, but I will tell you what I do NOT like. You used FaceMakerEn an to make your face graphics which is lame. :P
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I do agree that they are not all that...
I'm currently looking to get better faces but i cant seem to find anything which can do the faces i want :S you know any which can help?
 

The Map Helper

Member

346
shadowbutterfly93":4lr4b9rx said:
The Map Helper":4lr4b9rx said:
I like your battle system, but I will tell you what I do NOT like. You used FaceMakerEn an to make your face graphics which is lame. :P
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I do agree that they are not all that...
I'm currently looking to get better faces but i cant seem to find anything which can do the faces i want :S you know any which can help?
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Look in the resources section and request one (IN RESOURCE REQUESTS SUBTOPIC!!) Or search the site for an artist :O
 

shadowbutterfly93

Member

115
I searched the resorces area and couldn't find a face maker, not even the one i have!
If anyone knows of one tell me... I'll request one first and see what i get tho
 
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