[BM] Game Theme

[pzanno]

It's been ages since I've posted on this forum, but I recently got inspired to compose a new piece. This song is entitled Confused and I think it would work well as a character theme or an overall game theme. However, that's just what I think, I'd love to know what you think. And please give me some feedback and critiques, because I know this song is far from perfect. Hope you enjoy! If you want to use this song, just give credit to pzanoo. Thanks.

Confused

 

[zephstudio]

Very nice! I think it definitely has a classic RPG game theme feel to it, so you hit the mark with that in my opinion. Good job on the tempo shift later on in the song, it transitioned smoothly.

My critique would be that there are a few moments where it seems like the wrong note might have been used, and one in particular was kind of jarring. I don't know of a better way to illustrate this than by taking the part and showing you what I mean, so I quickly made that tiny portion in fruity loops.

Before you listen, know that the FIRST thing you hear is what you've got, and the SECOND thing you hear is what I think it should be to not sound off key. Then I repeat just the two notes a few times using each way so you can hear what the difference is.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/573280327c5e3646/

I hope it makes sense! Good work though, I like it.

 

[pzanno]

Thanks for the comment and the critique! I would have never noticed that mistake. You were definitely right though. For some reason I find it really hard to pick out mistakes like that. Even though I play by ear, I can't hear those types of mistakes. I'm glad someone can :P The change has been made and the new version should be up. If you notice anything else please let me know!

 

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[DoctorChaos]

I think it's a little too boring maybe it needs a little more action. :boo: