BKs - Art Stop - HKCP Addon Stop (PA)

[BunnyKinx]

I dont know if these are good enough, but please bare in mind i have only every sprited 3times in my life lol.
First lot. I hope to add at least one tile a day to this list.

WIPS
Lamp
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd19 ... ampWIP.png[/img]
Orange Boxes
Before
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd19 ... gesBox.png[/img]
After
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd19 ... esBox2.png[/img]
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Pots

Boxes

Box Addons

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I know these are just simple edits at the moment. but im new to tilesets and hope to become more active in this field as i need tilesets for a project im on so please give feedback and ideas.

thanks

 

[Grathea]

Sure, I'll give you some C&C.
First, in the box with the ?oranges?, the outlines are too harsh. Try using selout to make it look softer and more realistic. As it is, the outlines are too harsh.
Secondly, the lettuce could do with an extra color, or maybe two.

 

[BunnyKinx]

lol thats funny cause these are franken tiles from venetias (well the leafs are and the oranges a direct copy...)
but i understand. i dont thing the oranges are no where near as good as Venetias but i dont understand where the leaves went wrong really.. they are a direct cut and paste...

but thanks and i will try and get them fixed in the next couple of hours

 

[Despain]

boxes

 

[BunnyKinx]

ahh so they are :P

would not belive that english is my first language :D. dont know how it got through my firefox Spellcheck :P

 

[BunnyKinx]

hey update.. i really wanna know where im going wrong with this WIP
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd19 ... ampWIP.png[/img]http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd193/XcuMa/LampWIPlarge.png[/img]

 

[Arcanum]

Well, it's somewhat difficult to find out what's wrong if I can't figure out what "it" is supposed to be. Mind filling us in?

 

[BunnyKinx]

sorry i just added it to the main post
its going to be a lamp but i have not added the lamp yet,,, so its kinda lamp post :P

 

[Venetia]

I like the lamp post quite a bit so far; very futuristic/fantasy.

The revised oranges are much better. Perhaps the ones further down in the pile could use more dark tones, but that's a trifle, really.

The pots are fine, and the boxes look fine, too, albeit a little smallish. But, like for a desktop display or something, they'd work fine.

I don't recognize the leaf pattern, but then again I can't remember eating breakfast this morning XD. Mine or not, they need some highlights. The outlines are fine.

The eHCKP (Environmental HKCP) probably won't start major production for atleast another 1-2 months, so I can get the regular HKCP really rolling. But like I said in the other thread, you're looking ahead, and I love it :thumb:

 

[BunnyKinx]

i dont like the HK template mainly cause its to small for me. (i know its big but still not big enougth for ALL details) but i like the Tileset size. so i will work on this in the mean time till we get a HK sized template of our own. I do see why people really like HK and i like seeing some of the finished sprites. :D

I was wondering why my sprites are so small... they come direct from your Tileset. the lamp seems really small :S

 

[adelaidechoc]

for that lamp WIP... I found that blue-line thing is odd.
I dunno, you shaded the pipe (or whatever you call it-i don't remember the english name) and make it look 3-d (or has deepth) but not for the lamp itself.

2d in 3d = odd

 

[Emtch]

It looks good. I like the lamp post. Finally some more tileset pieces for HK.