Avatar the king of fire(Demo)

[ambrosepro]

This game is made by my sibilings and I,the ambrosepro Productions.Screenies are uploaded but here's the Main plot

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The Story
Once There Was A Continent Called Araya thier land was happy until A great wizard called  the Shadow Zana Destroyed the elf kingdom.
your adventure will be you must restore the elf kingdom in this game.

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Characters
Ronan
Description
He is the Avatar Of The Fire and also the main character of this game his age 17 he is a
fit boy and love to go hunting by himself his family is dead when he was 5,he is one of the chosen child.

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Mario
Description
Mario is once a imperial solider but he betrayed them he is the character you will meet in a secret room,
He is also a member of the rebal you will meet him in the demo

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Credits
Thanks To Me And My siblings
and the other scripters since i use thier script but thanks!

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http://img184.imageshack.us/my.php?image=avatar1xl3.png

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http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=avatar2ze2.png

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http://img265.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peoplebx8.png

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http://www.megaupload.com/?d=110U517G

 

[ambrosepro]

Sorry if i put the link pls forgive me

 

[friend]

WTH IS THIS?
You aren't even telling us which tags are screenies and which tags and plots.
The plot is too shallow.

and WTH? Avatar - The last Airbender,

Avatar is the name, AND BASED ON THE FOUR ELEMENTS?

and oh no, RTP haven...

Ok tell me how old are you seriously!
Your story is a joke too!

 

[Luminier]

Please acquaint yourself with the rules. You need to say a bit more about your story, and characters. Also give us a bit of info on features that set this project apart from others. And (properly)using the tags for your screenshots would be nice. Your overuse of spoilers is irritating. There's really no reason to use them at all, let alone that many, and with no information outside of them. Also, your English is atrocious. It's forgivable, since I'm sure English isn't your first language, but if you're going to make a game in a certain language, please make sure you at least have a better grasp of it then... this.

Please fix up your post hastily, or I may be forced to lock this. Thanks.