Ishmael Tanaka, a 16 year old teen, is a child whose father is japanese-american, and whose mother is american. His father is currently on duty in Japan, where Ishmael has lived since before he could remember. While living here, he has become friends with a girl named Chiyoko. However, to each other, they are more than just friends. One spring day, Ishmael is told by his father that they will be returning to America. Ishmael must now find a way to break the news to Chiyoko. After avoiding her for 2 weeks after that, he finally gets the courage to call her, and tell the truth. That is where Armageddon:Awakening begins.
Hello, and this is a thread for my project Armageddon:Awakening. So far, I currently have a demo, which is about 1 hour long. From what I've been told, it isn't very difficult, something I wish to fix in the next demo. It is a big file (150 MB), because of the MP3s. So, I can understand if you do not wish to download. However, if you can find the time, please do so and give me your critique.
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Ishmael Tanaka
Age: 16
Weight: 58 kg
Height: 1.8 m
Weapon: Sword
Element: Chaos
Ishmael Tanaka is a Japanese-American, and is about to move back to America (Although he was born there, he doesn't remember it, as he moved to Japan before he turned 1). After an encounter with a man in white armor, he is pulled into a mysterious place. After confronting a man who called himself Adam, he ran into some beings made of darkness. Somehow, a sword appeared before Ishmael. Using this blade, Ishmael destroyed the beings. Soon after, he encountered Samael, who called the beings 'Shadows'. After almost dying at the hands of that man, he was rescued by 2 Golden Knights. Hours later, he awoke and was told by the Knights where he is and that he must travel to 10 different worlds, where 10 sefirot reside, and obtain these Sefirot. So, Ishmael and his new partner, Ruth, set off to complete there task. But, there is more to Ishmael that meets the eye.
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Chiyoko Yamada
Age: 16
Weight: 41 kg
Height: 1.6 m
Weapon: N/A
Element: N/A
Chiyoko is Ishmael's best friend, and has been for years. After getting a call from Ishmael, she sensed something was wrong and agreed to meet him. They talked, and Chiyoko felt very sad that Ishmael had to leave. But, she told Ishmael it was alright, and that she'll see him again someday. But, as they sat there, Ishmael began to spoke of hearing voices. Chiyoko heard nothing and was worried about Ishmael. Than, all of a sudden, everything went black. It was if she was frozen in time. She couldn't hear Ishmael, nor feel him or see him. She couldn't feel anything. It was as if she was in a void, where nothing exsisted. She was in an eternal sleep.
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Ruth
Age: 2 Hours
Weight: 22 kg
Height: 0.9 m
Weapon: Axe
Element: Fire, Water, Air, Earth, Light
A Homunculus created by The Alchemist.
Skilled in both physical combat and
the magic arts, she is a valuable ally.
Ishmael Tanaka
Age: 16
Weight: 58 kg
Height: 1.8 m
Weapon: Sword
Element: Chaos
Ishmael Tanaka is a Japanese-American, and is about to move back to America (Although he was born there, he doesn't remember it, as he moved to Japan before he turned 1). After an encounter with a man in white armor, he is pulled into a mysterious place. After confronting a man who called himself Adam, he ran into some beings made of darkness. Somehow, a sword appeared before Ishmael. Using this blade, Ishmael destroyed the beings. Soon after, he encountered Samael, who called the beings 'Shadows'. After almost dying at the hands of that man, he was rescued by 2 Golden Knights. Hours later, he awoke and was told by the Knights where he is and that he must travel to 10 different worlds, where 10 sefirot reside, and obtain these Sefirot. So, Ishmael and his new partner, Ruth, set off to complete there task. But, there is more to Ishmael that meets the eye.
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Chiyoko Yamada
Age: 16
Weight: 41 kg
Height: 1.6 m
Weapon: N/A
Element: N/A
Chiyoko is Ishmael's best friend, and has been for years. After getting a call from Ishmael, she sensed something was wrong and agreed to meet him. They talked, and Chiyoko felt very sad that Ishmael had to leave. But, she told Ishmael it was alright, and that she'll see him again someday. But, as they sat there, Ishmael began to spoke of hearing voices. Chiyoko heard nothing and was worried about Ishmael. Than, all of a sudden, everything went black. It was if she was frozen in time. She couldn't hear Ishmael, nor feel him or see him. She couldn't feel anything. It was as if she was in a void, where nothing exsisted. She was in an eternal sleep.
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Ruth
Age: 2 Hours
Weight: 22 kg
Height: 0.9 m
Weapon: Axe
Element: Fire, Water, Air, Earth, Light
A Homunculus created by The Alchemist.
Skilled in both physical combat and
the magic arts, she is a valuable ally.
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I don't want to talk much about the story, since there's a plot twist (of sorts) right in the beginning of the game.
However, here are some reviews (These come from the RMXP3 contest on the GameFAQs RMXP board)
Throughout the game the presentation was excellent, though at times I found the text scroll a bit slow. The characters were believable in how they spoke and the mood was assisted by well placed music. At first I was beginning to think that the game was going to have slow battles, though by the time I acquired Ruth as a party member it really picked up. There was a large variety of skills keeping battles exciting, some of which were well integrated into the events of the story. I found that the main story took a back seat to the other events, though I'm sure you'd want to keep a few twists up your sleeve
Graphics: 9
There’s a lot of RTP here minced with a lot of custom things. The thing that gets such a high score is how well the custom graphics are blended with the RTP. (With the exception of Ishmael’s battler) It is very hard to tell the difference between what is RTP and what isn’t.
Sound: 8
Most of the music on this game is custom. What matter is that the music fits the mood quite well nearly everytime.
Story: 8
Ok, I loved this story. There’s a dark undertone to the game while at the same time the game manages to keep from becoming too dark and serious. Now, the game is serious, and rarely does it take any time to break this momentum, so don’t expect to be able to play through it all in one sitting without losing a bit of enthusiasm.
Originality: 9
It’s hard to explain how original this game is without giving away any of the story. Suffice it to say that I’ve never seen anything like this game before. Storywise there are a lot of small turns to keep it original instead of going into any given RPG stereotypes. However, the names will be quite familiar to anyone, expect to see a wizard named Merlin and expect the following line: “Call me Ishmaelâ€.
Fun: 7
The battle system in this game is used very nicely and keeps boredom away very well. The story is fun to follow so that doesn’t get old too terribly fast. However, from the beginning this game takes itself way too seriously and never breaks this, even for a moment. Also, NO enemy ever stood a chance against my hero. At the beginning a simple cast of barrier and attacks hit 0 damage. By midway the barrier was no longer necessary for 0 damage. The difficulty could stand to be a bit higher on the final product.
Advice:
I can’t really give any good advice, I don’t know if I could make a story this well…
However, it wouldn’t hurt to get a new battler for Ishmael (his really stands out as being below the standard set by the others), and, of course, kick up the difficulty as the game progresses.
The Point: 8.1
This game is thus far off to a wonderful start and looks to be a major hit when it is released. However, don’t expect much of anything lighthearted out of it, the game is completely serious and seems intent on remaining so.
Thanks for looking. Also, please note, this is the first of a planned trilogy.