Animated Batter - Alan

[brainstorm]

This is a battler using a new template I made. It's kind of weird. The Guy sways way to much, and the animations are undone. But this is what I got so far. It's for a Flash Game That's why it's not in Minkoff Format, but maybe someone could fashion it into Minkoff or Cybersam's CBS.

Animation: ~

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8696 ... atecd0.gif[/IMG]

Sheet: ~

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/3030/alanbw2.png[/IMG]

Template: ~

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1903 ... atenv6.png[/IMG]

 

[Sieghart]

gosh the ready animation looks like it was having an earthquake
i will giv you some tips
in the ready animation
make it a little shaking than overpowered shaking effect
c0z it looks like the character was drunk xD
but the pre battle is okay

 

[brainstorm]

Thanks. I fixed it and added some new poses I'll post it up later.

 

[Buster]

Hm, his upper body moves way too much, and I'm not sure if his lower body should be moving at all (I'm talking about lower lower body, i.e. the feet and calves). Other than that and the fact that I'm confused by what his attack pose (That's what it is, right?) is supposed to be, it's looks good. Nice looking template you've got there.

EDIT: Oh, I see, they're glasses. I thought he was throwing some kind of wind... thing...

 

[brainstorm]

If that's the case I think he should throw something else. Something bigger. But what?


EDIT::

Animation:~

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8893 ... atejd6.gif[/img]

Sheet:~

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9168/alanen3.png[/img]

 

[badmonur]

maybe tone down the shaking movment and ease up on the blure a bit. Other than that its fine.

 

[brainstorm]

Thanks... But I've done a few more before looking at this post. How do you like it?

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/8416 ... atelz9.gif[/img]

I'll try to fix it... But no promises.

 

[Buster]

That first attack looks pretty sweet, but the kick looks kinda... awkward...

 

[Kiniko]

The ready needs work.

 

[brainstorm]

That first attack looks pretty sweet, but the kick looks kinda... awkward...

The guy told be to "Exaggerate" a bit. Do Think I exaggerated too much?


The Attacks do look weird, but If someone wouldn't mind could they touch it up for me?

EDIT::::::Sorry forgot image:

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1689/alanai3.png[/img]

 

[badmonur]

that upward kick looks too akward. Nobody could kick like that.

 

[brainstorm]

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6899 ... atefk9.gif[/img]

If I keep doing this I'll have a million things to fix. I need to get on the stuff your asking.

 

[Atnas]

I don't think his feet should move. And make his body only move a tiny bit, like not 3 pixels but 1. I love the purple bit though. Nice work.

 

[brainstorm]

WOOO!!!! Thanks for that... I worked hard on the purple part. I'm gonna work on the animation and the right now... Do I need to do the foot thing?

 

[crazymew]

the legs look like their breaking in the ready stance... maybe a tidbit of work on the kick... but other than that, it's great...

here are some street fighter stances that may or may not help you out...

http://www.gsarchives.net/arcade/street ... reathe.gif[/IMG]http://www.gsarchives.net/arcade/street_fighter_alpha_3/sprites/animated/playable/Juli_breathe.gif[/IMG]

 

[Lei]

He looks drunk ^_^