Angel Symphony Sketches

[brainstorm]

I did some sketches for characters for a side project that probably won't get finished, but I'm trying all the same. The characters are all Heroines, which is good for the theme of the game. Need alot of good music, btw. Sakari, You ROCK!! Anyway, I have some sketches that I need c n c on. Mainly Anatomical issues so I can get better at art. Their pretty huge so, pay no attention to sketchy lines. Also, the second link may not be safe for work (And that's a recorder in her hand guys, don't get perverted. It's censorship.)

Ailith and Silver

Aer


EDIT::: On second thought, I'll resize them in a couple minutes, or tomorrow.

 

[brainstorm]

Double Post:::

I vectored Ailith in photoshop and still want C n C on how I did.

Spoiler: Vector-Ailith

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[Ratty524]

Er... The style is kind of ok, they just don't really seem to suit my taste, of course you don't have to follow that.

Now as for the hands of Ailith, they look really tentacle-ish, and the thumb looks a bit too small, it looks really weird.

Also, I don't think her shoes are shaded enough, give it some shading.

 

[brainstorm]

Wow, the thumb does look kind of off thanks and I guess your right about the shoes. Thanks.

 

[lunarea]

Their hands and arms do make them look a little masculine. And while that looks fine on Ailith (she seems like a tomboy), it's real strange on Silver. She looks kind of dainty in her facial expression and that dress, so the hand is just too wide and manly - same for the arm; the forearm looks like it has a ton of muscle, very boy-like. Maybe you could try making her arm and hand a little thinner?

Another thing that bugs me a little are Silver's shoulders. They slope too fast and don't seem very defined. Maybe you could try defining them a little more?

I do like the costume design, and Aer's eyes are very cute in the vector version. I love the eyelashes

 

[Venetia]

When I saw the first facial expression I said "Wow! How exciting! A really expressive expression!" It looked kinda like the character was humble and was doing an unsure half-smirk (which went nicely with the fact that they were slouching). That had a lot of character. Incidentally I looked at the single character first.

Then I realized they all had the same expression, and nearly the same faces, as well. They could very well be triplets.

I doubt they all have the same personality and I doubt they're triplets, so some variety in faces and expressions (and postures, they're all slouching) would be a leap forward.

This, on top of the masculine arm thing and such that'd been mentioned before.

 

[AdamSmith]

I like the style, the big hands and feet, also great design with the gloves and boots, good clothing folds and accessories.

However I personally don't like the posture, they seem to be slouching, looking lazy like they can't be bothered to stand up right.
Sticking her belly out isn't attractive. Maybe thats the kind of pose you were going for though.

Good job on the cel shading style too, you've hit it perfectly on the pants.

 

[brainstorm]

Both Silver and Ailith were supposed to be somewhat tomboys... That's the reason I gave Silver the hat. Ailith and Silver are best friends. Silver's the kind of rich girl who wished she weren't. Vise Versa with Ailith.

Aer on the other hand is the generic random new girl, that's overly hyper, sometimes strange, and has a weird way of keeping to herself at times though loves to be with others.

I see what your saying about all of them though. So, I need to work on arms and posture?