Lune de la Cruor
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A Serenade of Woe and Bliss: Lessons for Sinners
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I do say, I like, the story is different from other, I like how it sounds so far, anyway, I would like to comment that the storyline seems familiar, I also wonder how the facesets will mend into the game... Are you going to use the RTP? I have so many questions and I would love to play this game!
Thank you and have a nice day!
Thank you and have a nice day!
StrawberrySmiles
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I love the myth you created to explain the world's creation! I also love how you explained the sun and the moon. XD
I'm currently re-writing a story of mine to make my own myth, and this totally inspires me!
Good job! ^_^
I'm currently re-writing a story of mine to make my own myth, and this totally inspires me!
Good job! ^_^
Lune de la Cruor
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Thank you for the feedback :girl:
To answer some questions, I am using RTP and don't know myself, how I put the faces in the game, because I haven't found a way to make the appear like I want...
I feel flattered that my little creation myth inspired you xD Hope you come up with something cool.
As for now, Lesson 1 is actually done.
I am just rewriting some dialogs right now and I am looking for a (beta-)tester, to look over the texts. Basically someone who can check it for proper spelling and grammar, maybe rephrase some parts, to make it sound more natural and of course to find possible bugs xD
To answer some questions, I am using RTP and don't know myself, how I put the faces in the game, because I haven't found a way to make the appear like I want...
I feel flattered that my little creation myth inspired you xD Hope you come up with something cool.
As for now, Lesson 1 is actually done.
I am just rewriting some dialogs right now and I am looking for a (beta-)tester, to look over the texts. Basically someone who can check it for proper spelling and grammar, maybe rephrase some parts, to make it sound more natural and of course to find possible bugs xD
Wow, I must say, this seems really interesting, and the screenshots are fucking beautiful...
How much dialogue is there in it, is it like, dialogue heavy, cause if there isn't TOO much (Like, a Lord of the Rings novel too much...), I could have a crack at the spelling and grammar for you, since I AM English, lol.
How much dialogue is there in it, is it like, dialogue heavy, cause if there isn't TOO much (Like, a Lord of the Rings novel too much...), I could have a crack at the spelling and grammar for you, since I AM English, lol.