A guy I drew

[bladeking77]

Here he is:

I would love some feedback.
What's done right, what's done wrong...

 

[DJ]

well.....overall, his body is too weird.
especially, his neck is too wide, and you have wrong way to put mucles and veins - which make is look creep.
and you should put collarbones.

face is not really bad, it's kinda unique.. but you should try fixing te nose little bit,
and give more detail to hair.

and yes, your style is not bad. Keep it up.

** I can't say i am really good at drawing, but I can give you little bit of example.

** scan is kinda fucked up,.

 

[bladeking77]

Thanks, that really helped. I'm still bad with the basic lines, but I hope I improve.

 

[Sauk]

If I may add some critique on his physique ( no rhyme intended ).

Look at his proportions.

Both pectoralis majors are gigantic, which wouldn't be a problem, however he is lacking in his lats, and seems to have no visible anterior serratus.

Notice how far his latissimus dorsi protrudes outwards?

 

[moog]

where are his nipples :x

and yeah the neck is the main thing that stands out imo, but idk what kind of style you're going for

 

[bladeking77]

Thank you all. That was quite helpful.

So I decided to draw him again...

Spoiler

This time I drew him whole, but I didn't colour/shade/clean him yet.
It's more like a sketch.

What do you think?

 

[Misery]

it's alright

~Foxlord, post better. This is a serious board, therefore post more seriously. Two word responses are unacceptable and lazy. Elaborate. Why is it alright? Give something, but next time you post shit in a serious topic or board you will receive a warning.

 

[Sauk]

You still didn't include the lattisimus dorsi.

I could understand if it was a neutral position like so:

With his arms down, but your guy has his arms way out to the side, so it would look more like this ( The left arm ):

It's not protruding to an extreme extent like a full out front lat spread, but it's still shown to exist ( where yours looks like he is box shaped instead of V-tapered ).