A Curtain - Looking for Critique

[Twin Matrix]

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Trying to get a curtain down but having a bit of problems with the outline. What do you think?

 

[lunarea]

It seems a little random, like the folds and the lines don't actually go together. The V-shaped line at the top is kinda odd too. I'd expect curtains to have sharper and more straight lines.

Try this (I think it kind of fits your style of shading):

Spoiler

http://www.mrcad.com/download/curtain-polygon.jpg[/IMG]

 

[Twin Matrix]

http://www.maj.com/gallery/starmies4/Se ... tut051.png[/img]
http://www.maj.com/gallery/starmies4/Se ... tut052.png[/img]

Is that better?

 

[lunarea]

@ Twin Matrix:

It depends on the kind of style this is going to go with. For a more cartoony and exagerated stile, it's perfect as is.

If, however, you're going with something more serious/realistic, consider making the curves at the bottom of the drapes just a little less deep. It should be almost a straight line with a few dips here and there.

I prefer it flaring out a bit (like the colored version) because it gives it more of a dreamy or even haunted look.

I like it overall

 

[~Atlaswing~]

the pixelation is a bit unwanted... XD

Uh, i suggest try spriting the whole outline rather than using that certain method that makes it blur....