A character in progress

[Reaper*]

I always wanted to try and make a character so i found a picture as reference and started the character.

Right now i only made the front pose but tell me if it's good or no?

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9972 ... lemez5.png[/IMG]

(Note the picture is a player of fire emblem.)

[Edit]
Finished the walking pose of the front.

[Edit 2]
Shaded the face tell me if it's better

[Edit 3]
Started the bottom poses

 

[Atnas]

The saturation is like castration of my eyes.

 

[bojjenclon]

wow. I have never made a char from scratch. I always use templates. So good job!

 

[Reaper*]

Right now i'm focusing on the body and hair i haven't tried changing the face any suggestions?

I used the rtp template but i removed it because i had to try it in a project to see if it will walk well.

Thanks.

 

[bojjenclon]

Oh. Then ok. But yeah the face is ok. I think the eyes seem to low...

 

[Reaper*]

Ok i'll change them later i need to make the other poses too if someone want the picture i'm using as reference to try making it i will upload it.

Thanks for all the help.

 

[ZephyrSkye]

I suggest darkening the outlines a bit. That will make it feel a little more solid and less flat.

 

[Reaper*]

You mean the face or the body? if the body i need to change it too i need to make it different the shirt abit longer i mean.

 

[ZephyrSkye]

The face is good. I meant the hair and clothes.

 

[Reaper*]

Oh ok i meant to edit the clothes abit even the hair i used that for now i'm going to try a not all spiky hair as the picture i'm using.

 

[Reaper*]

Update!

I started the bottom poses i'll edit the body later when i finish the bottom ones and the side ones.

And what do you think guys if i make a sword like that?

Sort of star ocean one i still need to change the colours of the cover they were just to not leave it in white.

 

[Samboy]

Ok, the colors on it are WAY too saturated. You need to desaturate the colors a little, (and by desaturate, I mean "grey" the color). If you did that, it'd be clearer and easier to see. And wouldn't castrate Envelope's eyes lol.

 

[Reaper*]

You mean for the eyes?

If yes i can't make them better then that.

 

[Itansha]

I think he meant the clothes. That blue is far too bright and there isn't enough contrast.

 

[Reaper*]

Yes ok i intend to change the clothes colors they are wrong placed.

But before i fix all the little problems i will finish the sprite first.

 

[bojjenclon]

looks pretty good man.

 

[Reaper*]

Thanks