2 Songs, feedback please

[wuw94]

Okay, so here goes... I've got two songs that I made, and I really want to put it in my game.  Just wondering if you have any suggestions as to where I should put them. (i.e. dungeon, title, gameover, cutscene...)

Oh, and here is the first song.  I made it sound evil. (MUAHAHA)
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SLVHSTVW
It is called "Night"

Here's the second song.  I might use this in a cutscene...
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=R8MQJOP2
It is called "Heart"

Feedback, suggestions, other comments would be appreciated.

 

[moog]

upload it so people dont have to download it :3

im dl now, ill edit with my response

 

[Sweed Raver]

Night:

I didn't really like the drums, I don't think it fits and so on.

And second, if you are going to use it in a RMXP game, you wont need mp3. In fact, it is only just bad because of its size. Instead, try make midi out of this. Thats because RMXP has really nice sounds "built in" the program. One other good thing with midi is that you can make your songs extremely good repeatable, without having any offset between end and start.

Try that.

If I were you I would add a fingered bassline and/or a timpani, because they would most likely fill most space this song is not using, in any way you'd like it.

 

[Speedpaws]

The first song, Night. The drums don't fit like Raver said. Maybe you could add a different kind of beat or rhythm? The second one, I really like it. Soft, entertaining, and nice to listen to. =)